Education is regarded as one of the most important factors which enable the country to thrive in the whole world. And a student graduated from university is often sophisticated in doing convoluted work, which can progress the society. Noted that most of the CEOs of these most outstanding company all over the world graduate from a university, so that the government have the responsibility to help students who cannot offer the tuition fee of an university for the sake of the advance of the country. Hence, it doesn't mean the government should offer a completely free university education to any student who has been admitted to a university but who cannot afford the tuition.
There are a variety of countries around the world, such as developing countries mainly located in Asia, highly developed countries like the USA and underdeveloped African countries. It is unreasonable to require the government of Zimbabwe, where the average GDP is approximately $0.1, to offer a free university education to even the best students in its country. Because the mainly problem of countries like Zimbabwe need to tackle is to make less people starve to death. Free schooling may be a quxiotic idea in the underdeveloped countries. And this target may also seemed to be unrealizable in the largest developing country, China. The economic situation in China is much better than that in Zimbabwe. However, China faced another knotty problem that there so many students who cannot afford the university tuition fee. The population is so large that it will be a financial burden for the government to let these students go to school without charge.
Moreover, even the USA, the highly developed country in the world with moderate population, doesn’t do so. Student loan is very popular in America, it is a wise way to enable the poor students to go to school. These students may study harder with the pressure of loan, and get a decent job after graduating so that they can soon repay the loan. The interest rate of the loan is relatively low.
In a conclusion, the government should help the poor students based on the economic situation of its own country, and the way of helping is also various.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours. Use specific reasons and examples to suppo 70
- Governments should offer a free university education to any student who has been admitted to a university but who cannot afford the tuition.Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take 50
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours. Use specific reasons and examples to suppo 70
- Governments should offer a free university education to any student who has been admitted to a university but who cannot afford the tuition.Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 445, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...nts who cannot offer the tuition fee of an university for the sake of the advance ...
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Line 1, column 513, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...f the advance of the country. Hence, it doesnt mean the government should offer a comp...
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Line 3, column 447, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun people is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...like Zimbabwe need to tackle is to make less people starve to death. Free schooling ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, may, moreover, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1835.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 369.0 442.535393258 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.972899729 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83288195021 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506775067751 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9084937951 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.941176471 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7058823529 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11764705882 5.21951772744 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264991178478 0.243740707755 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833026516988 0.0831039109588 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122693488379 0.0758088955206 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151369571837 0.150359130593 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135039777198 0.0667264976115 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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