Governments should place few, if any, restrictions on scientific research and
development.
Scientific Research and Development has proven to be extremely crucial for humans.Mankind's urge to quench its thirst for curiosity and to ameliorate
its chances of survival, has led to various inventions. All of these inventions , from inventing the wheel to building and launching space rockets,
are all the outcomes of research and development in science , which makes it essential to have the same. One of the negative virtues of
humans is greediness which might lead to unethical and possibly dangerous experiments which leads me to believe that the government has a role to
play in regulating and restricting scientific research and development activities.Government being the body which ideally works towards the progress
of the country must not be oblivious to the scientific research and development that is present in the country.
There is room for experiments involving hazardous elements such as Uranium, Plutonium which have adverse effects on the planet like
DNA mutation, imbalance in ecosystems, etc when not performed in a safe environment. In the past, it was witnessed that some scientists
performed cruel experiments on human brains which lead to undesirable behaviour of the subject of the experiment that led the government
to intervene and ban such experiments.
Managing resources for the research is as important as the research itself as sometimes the resources used in the research could be
in the verge of endangerment or it might be a banned product in the country which makes it illegal for the usage of it. Hence , I believe government should
play a role in keeping track of the procurement process and impose restrictions on such as the quantity and type of resource
used in the research. On the other hand imposing too many restrictions might hamper the pace and progress of the research .
It is important to strike a balance in imposing the restrictions by the goverment.
In conclusion , I strongly agree that there must be some restrictions imposed by the government to regulate the research and at the same time
keep it just enough to not hamper the progress of the scientific development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1816.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 345.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26376811594 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15701227914 2.79657885939 113% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 215.323595506 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495652173913 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 23.0359550562 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.621001938 60.3974514979 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 181.6 118.986275619 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.5 23.4991977007 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 5.21951772744 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 17.0 4.97078651685 342% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276000384537 0.243740707755 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111109822805 0.0831039109588 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710179117783 0.0758088955206 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0895237352585 0.150359130593 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764167909915 0.0667264976115 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.6 14.1392134831 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 48.8420337079 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 12.1743820225 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.82 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 100.480337079 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.8971910112 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 11.2143820225 139% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 11.7820224719 178% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.