Governments should place few, if any, restrictions on scientific research and development.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Should government pose few restrictions on scientific research and development in all cases? Some people believe that claim is greatly beneficial, but I can not fully agree with this view point for two reasons. First, the resources are limited. Second, there are uncertainty and unsafety.
To begin with, it should be acknowledged that placing fewer restrictions on scientific research and development is conducive to the development in certain aspects.This recommendation is a commendable policy for many scientists, which would surely exert a positive influence on stimulating innovations and creativity. Hence, the experimental environments would be broader and the researchers can explore more unknown fields.For instance, in the field of space exploration, people have enjoyed so many benefits it provided, such as stepping on the moon, GDP and global monitoring. No one could say that the scientific attempt in the space is bound to improve the qualities of people.What's more, the project is a tremendous and it has taken a considerable amount of time, money and energy. To be more specific, if governments put more restrictions on these researches, the technology and human-being could not be improved such rapidly.
However, the writers' over-optimistic attitude is betrayed, which is supported by an unsubstantiated assumption: the resources can be enough. If we humans have superfluous energy, time, money and resource, we could explore more to benefit the whole human being.But nowadays the resources on the earth are limited and we have more serious issues waited to be solved. COVID-19 in 2019 serve as a simple but persuasive example. When the epidemic broke out, people were threatened by the sever illness. The government at that moment ought to put more some restrictions to the less sever fields and focused on the immediate effects to save and rescue people. Indeed, most governments put their attention to inventing vaccines to protect the people from being infected. In this scenario, government should put more supports to the current pressing issues rather than the less serious scientific development.
Additionally, people should always bear in mind that the consequences of some scientific experiments are unforeseeable. They could possibly bring us certain benefits, but uncertainties and threatens which would endanger human being as well.For example, nowadays many countries are doing researches on the nuclear energy. We can not deny that nuclear energy provides a new idea of solving the problem of energy shortage. However, we also see the sever pollution and radiation to the oceans, the earth and human being, which make many people become sick. Another example is gene-editing technology.We seek hopes to this development to rescue more people, but no one could predict what we could be in the future after widely using it.We are also facing the risks that it might be misused to kill people.
To summarize, I concede that in certain occasions few restrictions are beneficial, but governments should not enable it to develop freely. The goal of scientific research and development is to improve the well-being of the whole human being, and governments are supposed to support it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, second, so, well, for example, for instance, such as, in all cases, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 19.5258426966 169% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2714.0 2235.4752809 121% => OK
No of words: 504.0 442.535393258 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38492063492 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73813722054 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06327359612 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 261.0 215.323595506 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517857142857 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 838.8 704.065955056 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.6842589465 60.3974514979 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.363636364 118.986275619 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9090909091 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.40909090909 5.21951772744 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185208509306 0.243740707755 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608790515532 0.0831039109588 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774572369755 0.0758088955206 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134718584455 0.150359130593 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575767150196 0.0667264976115 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 14.1392134831 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 48.8420337079 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.1743820225 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.1639044944 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 140.0 100.480337079 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.