“Governments are justified in circumventing civil laws when doing so is vital to the protection of national security.
The statemnet that says Governments reckon civil laws is necessary to protect the society and assure security of individuals is reliable and I strongly agree with this claim. It can protect country from chaos and provide safety feeling for people. However, in some circumstances this sattement might be wrong which i will explain now.
The most important reason which is vital to respect legislation is providing a civil situation that human race has achieved during last centuries. It takes hunderds of years and human kind broaden his mind to construct parliaments. The process of introducing laws improved countinuesly and nowdays for providing a legislation houres of discussing would be happened and all of the consequences scrutinize to ensure its productivity. Therefore, this legislation completely approporiate for people and society.
Another reason is that these laws protect country from chaos. It helps the society to follow special path which can ensure improvement of the society. If anybody just act according to his beliefs withoud concerning others idea, the society would like a jungle that each animal just act according his point of view and could be detrimantal for the others. When people accept some rules that may not completely agree with them, they may feel uncomfortable to some extant but in general it would be beneficial for the society as general.
In demecra society, parliament's members are elected directly or indirectly by people and idea of the society would reflect in the parliament and the legislation which introduced would like individuals' ideas. On the other hand, in dogmatic goverments, the legislation process may be incorrect and just support the government and do not consider about benefits of people. Therefore, these laws not necessary assure national security, since people try to act against them and it would lead to disorganizing in the country.
In conclusion, I reckon, in democratic country which rules are introduced by the parliament which reflect people's idea it could ensure national security. However, in dogmatic government these legislation would not necessary protect security of individuals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Message: Did you mean 'this legislation' or 'these legislations'?
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...curity. However, in dogmatic government these legislation would not necessary protect security of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, therefore, i reckon, in conclusion, in general, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1833.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 337.0 442.535393258 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43916913947 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91140721059 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522255192878 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9205618959 60.3974514979 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.5625 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0625 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.21951772744 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.243740707755 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0831039109588 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0758088955206 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150359130593 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667264976115 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 14.1392134831 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.1639044944 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 100.480337079 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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