The human mind will always be superior to machines because machines are only tools of human minds.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
In this era , we are surrounded by machines .From micro to macro all type of machines we used in our daily life. One point we should always keep in our mind that machines are the product of an innovative human mind. I agree that the humans will always be superior than the machine since they are invented by humans.
During the ancient time when machines were not invented human used his own mind to create some outstanding creations.Such as Seven Wonders of worlds whether it is The Great wall of china or the Taj Mahal .In the construction of this kind of structure there were not any advanced machinery used. Another example is the creation of Paintings of Picasso or Litreture Written by William Shakespear both were touchstone. Leonardo Da’ Vinci ‘s creations inspired us to build an aeroplane and a catapult. Thus human mind has no limits to imagine and invent.
Secondly Machines like computers, calculators and mobiles are the product of human mind .They exist because of an idea of human imagination. They are bound to do complex work in mere time as per commanded. The machines are becoming advanced day by day that is also the results of the persistent efforts of inventors. The advancement in science and technology is leaping forward by introducing more and more machines in the market.
The machines have their limit. Primarily machines run on a particular power source . Without their source of power they are unusable. They are capable of executing a task as per the limit they are configured. The malfunctioning of the machine can lead injuries to the operator or could disturb the schedule of work. There is also a chance of misinterpretation of the commands by the user.It could result in many major or minor problems.
In other hand the machines are faster than human in execution of works. Complex calculation can be done by computer in mere seconds. Our transportation is eased by using the vehicles.In everyday life machine has an important role. They are part of advancement of the technology in future.
As machines created by human and they evolved due to the efforts of human mind, It is concluded that human mind will be always superior than the machine.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, secondly, so, thus, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1836.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 374.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90909090909 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76264121987 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 215.323595506 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534759358289 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 597.6 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0286255146 60.3974514979 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4545454545 118.986275619 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 23.4991977007 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.45454545455 5.21951772744 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 7.80617977528 256% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235093639474 0.243740707755 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721653384564 0.0831039109588 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079049105013 0.0758088955206 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145555697516 0.150359130593 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0818653343627 0.0667264976115 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 14.1392134831 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.