If a goal is worthy, then any means taken to attain it are justifiable. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The speaker asserts that as long as goals is worthy, any means taken to attain it are justifiable. Indeed, stopping at nothing to get anything can make us fulfill some purposes. However, if the means taken to attain are extreme, it has negative influence on society and individuals. In my point of view, I strongly disagree with the speaker.
To begin with, in the economic fields, the things that any means taken to attain it are justifiable will cause economic recession. It is common that companies want to earn more profit, but if they do not stop at nothing to get what they want, they will cause social conflicts and economic disorder. Unfair competition can be a example. Since unfair competition cause economic injury to a business through deceptive or wrong business practices, it will lead to economic disorder. In sum, stopping at nothing to get anything will harm the economy.
Secondly, in the political area, stopping at nothing to get anything will induce political disorder. To many politician, becoming a president is their final goal. However, if they stop at nothing to get what they want in order to be a president, they will cause social disorder. Africa conflict is an example. For own interest, Africa’s leaders star many wars in Africa without minding victims. In a word, in the political area, if leaders stop at nothing to get what they want, it will lead to social disorder.
Finally, in the entertainment fields, the things that any means taken to attain it are justifiable will result unfair competition. To actors, wanting to be famous is reasonable, but if they stop at nothing to obtain what they want, it may cause improper things to happen. Unspoken rules in Korea can be an illustration. In Korea, because many actresses want to be famous, they stop at nothing to receive what they want; And in order to get opportunity of plays, they slept with director. As a result, many actresses commit a suicide, since they are unbearable. In brief, if people stop at nothing to get what they want, it is necessary to happen some improper things, even impairing themselves.
To sum up, in economic, political, and entertainment fields, the things that any means taken to attain it will cause a negative effect on society and individuals. Therefore, I totally disagree with what the speaker says.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 83, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...is worthy, any means taken to attain it are justifiable. Indeed, stopping at nothin...
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Line 3, column 85, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...hings that any means taken to attain it are justifiable will cause economic recessi...
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Line 3, column 326, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...mic disorder. Unfair competition can be a example. Since unfair competition cause...
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Line 5, column 105, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun politician seems to be countable; consider using: 'many politicians'.
Suggestion: many politicians
...hing will induce political disorder. To many politician, becoming a president is their final go...
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Line 7, column 84, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...hings that any means taken to attain it are justifiable will result unfair competit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, in brief, as a result, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1942.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 394.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92893401015 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71423650426 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.416243654822 0.4932671777 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 606.6 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 16.0 4.38483146067 365% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.2489330789 60.3974514979 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4347826087 118.986275619 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1304347826 23.4991977007 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86956521739 5.21951772744 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 17.0 5.13820224719 331% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0747896358758 0.243740707755 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0343633802691 0.0831039109588 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495182732474 0.0758088955206 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0677688667466 0.150359130593 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463852753702 0.0667264976115 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.