The increasingly rapid pace of life today causes more problems than it solves.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
It is debatable whether the increasingly fast-paced life in this day and age has engendered more problems than it solved. In many aspects of human lives today, it can easily be seen that there have been more problems rampant than solved ones due to rapid pace of life.
To begin with, hectic live has impinged upon human society at a micro level such as individuals, children, and family. Working individuals nowadays, usually have less leisure, resting time to spend; as a consequence, more health issues rise up such as chronic migrane, tilted spinal cord, mental issues, and sleep depravity. Despite drastic development in medicine, those non-fatal, chronic health issues are not being perfectly solved, which have detriments on people's everyday lives. Moreover, children are suffering due to their parents' inability to spend enough time with them, thus leading to attachment isses and defiancy. Families in these days as well are being harmed. In fact, the meaning and merit of family in the entire society is decaying, which is not a healthy phenomenon because family has been regarded as the most integral part of humanities. All the listed problems are occurring due to hectic, fast-paced life. It seems like more problems should have been solved regarding the time spent on solving problems, but as a side effect, new problems are emerging.
Furthermore, increasingly rapid pace of life has deleterious impact human society at a macro level. Corporates are always seeking new, novelty, and original products to meet their customers needs and to make people purchase more items. Meanings and values of each items have decayed and companies are merely just manufacturing items with machines that are so lifeless and souless. In terms of culture, music has become more disposable that lasts only for a couple of weeks. Producers and musicians are no longer interested in creating long lasting music as our ancestors. People's appreciation of arts has fallen as well; people can enjoy arts on their phones and computers, which make them to not visit galleries or museums anymore. Therefore, hectic life harmed people's lives in corporate and cultural level.
Admittedly, a myriad of problems have been solved. A lot of hunger issues, transportation issues, and issues of communication have been resolved owing to technological development that accompanied busy life. Work efficiency has increased drastically with advanced machines as well. However, working hours have not reduces and leisure time has not increased; in fact, it has become vice versa. Moreover, profits and sales have overrided the importance of values of each items and goods. A lot of problems have been solved on a surface level, but new problems are attacking core value of human lives.
All in all, because of aforementioned reasons, I agree with the given statement. Hectic life has impinged upon humans lives in both micro and macro level; in other words, the entire society. Our new mission of these days would have to be finding a balance to prevent obsession over rapid pace of life since over-indulgence of it yields more harm than good.
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Essay evaluation report
has deleterious impact human society
has deleterious impacts on human society
which make them to not visit galleries
which make them not to visit galleries
However, working hours have not reduces
However, working hours have not reduced
Sentence: Corporates are always seeking new, novelty, and original products to meet their customers needs and to make people purchase more items.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to customers and needs
Sentence: Meanings and values of each items have decayed and companies are merely just manufacturing items with machines that are so lifeless and souless.
Description: A determiner/pronoun, singular is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to each and items
Sentence: Moreover, profits and sales have overrided the importance of values of each items and goods.
Description: A determiner/pronoun, singular is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to each and items
Sentence: Working individuals nowadays, usually have less leisure, resting time to spend; as a consequence, more health issues rise up such as chronic migrane, tilted spinal cord, mental issues, and sleep depravity.
Error: migrane Suggestion: migrate
Sentence: Moreover, children are suffering due to their parents' inability to spend enough time with them, thus leading to attachment isses and defiancy.
Error: isses Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: defiancy Suggestion: defiance
Sentence: Meanings and values of each items have decayed and companies are merely just manufacturing items with machines that are so lifeless and souless.
Error: souless Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Moreover, profits and sales have overrided the importance of values of each items and goods.
Error: overrided Suggestion: No alternate word
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 4 2
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.0 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 4 2
No. of Sentences: 26 15
No. of Words: 506 350
No. of Characters: 2545 1500
No. of Different Words: 259 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.743 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.03 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.608 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 184 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 134 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 92 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 54 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.462 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.738 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.577 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.285 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.464 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.065 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 238, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... been more problems rampant than solved ones due to rapid pace of life. To begin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, thus, well, in fact, such as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2624.0 2235.4752809 117% => OK
No of words: 506.0 442.535393258 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18577075099 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7428307748 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69385785216 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 275.0 215.323595506 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54347826087 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 842.4 704.065955056 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9858702855 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.923076923 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84615384615 5.21951772744 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 5.13820224719 253% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167126703524 0.243740707755 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470860210365 0.0831039109588 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404427661564 0.0758088955206 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108523197625 0.150359130593 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044876483169 0.0667264976115 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.1392134831 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 153.0 100.480337079 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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