It' s hard to define whether you are happy right now, because we are living in a different place which may vary from relatives and countires. So do I. The life is complicated as there is no unique criterion to determine whteher we got more troubles or less by the increasingly rapid pace of life. While in my opinion, we should be optimistic about the future of our life even there are a lot of troubles unsovled.
I am very glad that I am living in a peaceful country while there are some countries still at war just at this moment. The world is changing rapidly but not at peace. We can see the syria is still invaded by ISIS, while there are suicide bomb accidents in Iraq which have killed thousands of people. For now, I have the chance to take the GRE test in a tranquil classroom, I must appreciate the opportunity that given by my country. On the other hand , we should not forget at the same time, some young people like us is grasping the guns in their hands to fight for peace and freedom, we should remember we are not living in a peaceful age, while we are living in a peaceful country.
Besides the war, there are still other troubles in our daily life. Due to the rapid development of our society, china is trying best to evovle into industrializational country. The subsequent problem is the eviroment pollution. Even if the Government has taken the air pollution into deep consideration with lots of measure implemented by the local authority, while there are also some other serious pollution. For example ,the earth with extradinary fertilizer is not suitable for planting corps any more in some part of China, which polluted the water underground likewise. This may be the single path to a modernizational country, while the results may had a serious infulence on the people of China.
It seem to be pessimistic when we discuss the war and pollution while I must assert that the pattern of the envrioment around you is totally depended by yourself. Given so many troubles as we are confronting, we as the cleverest primates should not be so bleak and we should fight for our future like our ancestors who went through the african continent to the world million years ago. I believe they struggled with life more seriously than us. Aswe are living in the life with rapid pace while we are not alone. The fast changing technology is developing our life better. Given there are still troubles which we can not predict whteher they are increasing or decreasing, we are still making progess as all the chances are accompanied with challenges.
In conclusion, I believe it is the attitude determines the conditon when we are living in the rapid pace of life, we should be optimistic and make more confidence of our cogent future. If we have the common sense about the world , troubles will fade away and we will make more progress in our life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, likewise, may, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 19.5258426966 169% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 33.0505617978 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2361.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 508.0 442.535393258 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64763779528 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74751043592 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65794493552 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 215.323595506 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48031496063 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 769.5 704.065955056 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 6.24550561798 240% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.9320200466 60.3974514979 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.652173913 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0869565217 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08695652174 5.21951772744 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 5.13820224719 234% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154903818121 0.243740707755 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542940413451 0.0831039109588 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423048623155 0.0758088955206 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0989583026712 0.150359130593 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042142905506 0.0667264976115 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 12.1639044944 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.