Issue: Nations should suspend govt. funding for
the arts when significant numbers of their
citizens are hungry and unemployed.
The author in the above issue talks about suspending government funding for arts for the welfare of the hungry and unemployment. As per my perspective, I would like to say that suspending funding for arts will not be best option for welfare of the citizens. There are multiple reason for my agreement with this view. I will try and enable my view in the above paragraph.
Firstly, The above statement indicates that we should stop funding for the arts for the welfare of the citizens. But as the above statement suggest, We cannot take it for the granted that there will be increase in the number of the employment and hungry. A specific survey must be carried out for the funding in arts and this brutal step should be taken.
Secondly, As Tourism plays a major role in the nation economy. If we stop funding of the arts the tourism will also be get effected due to this and nation income will be unbalanced due to this. An appropriate survey of the dependence on the tourism must be made to make an decession.Arts are the beauty of any nation. They are also called as true jewels of the nation. By abounding them, It can end to the Indian culture. Also if the funding is done than also it is not sure that it will help for the welfare of the people.
Thirdly, Government should carry out a specific survey for the investment done on different resources of arts to that of the result obtain due to this. Yet more investment done but it could not make it’s make a major role for the contribution, Then the government should stop funding for that resource. Thus due to this national income would be saved. Eventually, Development of the Nation lies in the development of the nation. So It may give a major effect for the welfare of the nation. But on this assumption, We cannot risk for the nation.
Thus to wrap discussion over this issues, So consolidating all the perspectives in one, I would like to say that all the decision should be taken by government to fight the national problems have to very careful and very much consciously only after observing all the thing in one, all the aftereffects of what will be their after decision. And As they suggest, abandoning of arts funding should be considered as the last option.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 215, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'be the best'.
Suggestion: be the best
...at suspending funding for arts will not be best option for welfare of the citizens. The...
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Line 1, column 325, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...for my agreement with this view. I will try and enable my view in the above paragraph. ...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...nce on the tourism must be made to make an decession.Arts are the beauty of any na...
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Suggestion: Arts
...urism must be made to make an decession.Arts are the beauty of any nation. They are ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...them, It can end to the Indian culture. Also if the funding is done than also it is ...
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Suggestion:
...ment done on different resources of arts to that of the result obtain due to this...
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Suggestion: Thus,
... should stop funding for that resource. Thus due to this national income would be sa...
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Suggestion: Thus,
...mption, We cannot risk for the nation. Thus to wrap discussion over this issues, So...
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Suggestion: these
...e nation. Thus to wrap discussion over this issues, So consolidating all the perspe...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'third', 'thirdly', 'thus', 'as to']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.199546485261 0.240241500013 83% => OK
Verbs: 0.142857142857 0.157235817809 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0657596371882 0.0880659088768 75% => OK
Adverbs: 0.047619047619 0.0497285424764 96% => OK
Pronouns: 0.047619047619 0.0444667217837 107% => OK
Prepositions: 0.151927437642 0.12292977631 124% => OK
Participles: 0.0453514739229 0.0406280797675 112% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.60580247305 2.79330140395 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0272108843537 0.030933414821 88% => OK
Particles: 0.00226757369615 0.0016655270985 136% => OK
Determiners: 0.136054421769 0.0997080785238 136% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0521541950113 0.0249443105267 209% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.00226757369615 0.0148568991511 15% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2238.0 2732.02544248 82% => OK
No of words: 401.0 452.878318584 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58104738155 6.0361032391 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.58838876751 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.291770573566 0.366273622748 80% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.211970074813 0.280924506359 75% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.142144638404 0.200843997647 71% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.104738154613 0.132149295362 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60580247305 2.79330140395 93% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 219.290929204 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.416458852868 0.48968727796 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 43.9435979974 55.4138127331 79% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6194690265 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0952380952 23.380412469 82% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.3760328669 59.4972553346 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.571428571 141.124799967 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0952380952 23.380412469 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.674092028746 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.21349557522 173% => OK
Readability: 40.2922455765 51.4728631049 78% => OK
Elegance: 1.66666666667 1.64882698954 101% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124328778675 0.391690518653 32% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.135300346056 0.123202303941 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0906975952054 0.077325440228 117% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.571729092054 0.547984918172 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.165257796386 0.149214159877 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634284953179 0.161403998019 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468198243483 0.0892212321368 52% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.515860080244 0.385218514788 134% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.095471550576 0.0692045440612 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100759661658 0.275328986314 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0211384848449 0.0653680567796 32% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.4325221239 77% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.30420353982 170% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88274336283 82% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 7.22455752212 97% => OK
Negative topic words: 8.0 3.66592920354 218% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.5995575221 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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