We know that music is the orthodx thing that we are gone crazy in our day to day life. It has become a propensity to get addicted to music. The musicians who give out the music are very passionate and produce there best works to make the people feel refreshed and music and takes us backwards in our thoughts and make us to feel like vintage stuff. Musicians are widely talented and passionate at there works they offer different kinds of music albums those are necessary and most likely liked by the audience. From the given phrase i would not likely agree with the author for the statement given that the real talent of the musician cannot accurately be assessed until the musician die,i object this statement for the following reasons.
Firstly,If the musician is passionate and has a good talent then he audience are the best reviewers who can assess the real talent and works of the musician.If he that utmost capability then they are ready to encourage such good talent and makes that musician a world popular one.
Secondly,the popular msuician is one who's talent flourishes not only when he exhibits his works for the ongoing generation but also who's works flourishes for the future generations also. So, in my opinion a true and a popular musician works and talent can be assessed when he is existing also. The real talent of the best musician also prevails all over in his absence. So,i do believe that the honest assessment can also be made in his presence.
There may be some circumstances that the audience may not judge the talent of the musician but i rebutt this because they are the one who make the person popular and they actually know how to judge a musician. A musician real talent is to impress and gain ga the gargatuan love from the proponents.
so, I finally conclude that the real talent can be judged and assessed not only when the musician dies but also during his existance.The proponents supports the real talent of the musician and delivers him the utmost respect and always lauds his works for generations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 58.6224719101 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1685.0 2235.4752809 75% => OK
No of words: 358.0 442.535393258 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70670391061 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46615775741 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.463687150838 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 542.7 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.0552586404 60.3974514979 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.615384615 118.986275619 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5384615385 23.4991977007 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 5.21951772744 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 7.80617977528 243% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352457878719 0.243740707755 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138182485875 0.0831039109588 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0939552413405 0.0758088955206 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214333198903 0.150359130593 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045018319882 0.0667264976115 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 48.8420337079 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.1743820225 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 100.480337079 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.