It is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man
or woman as a hero.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you
agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting
your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons
and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
In our current society, the complexity of its structure is keep evolving and with the convoluted structure, many critical disasters, such as murders or kidnapping, are occurred. However, among those events there are always people who are willing to solve the cases or help victims from the disasters. I would like to call those people are deserved to be treated as a hero. Therefore, I disagree with the claim and I do believe it is possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as a hero.
Granted, some people might have objections against my opinion because they truly believe that no living person can be a hero. The people would have a strict standard to distinguish a hero from people, such as they need tons of scientific evidence to prove a person must be considered as a hero or they might need numerous records or documents to prove a person's behaviors were sincere so she should be a hero. Moreover, if they want to evaluate a person's behavior in a historical view then, it is impossible to regard living man or woman as a hero. The reasons might be vary but mostly, if rules have numerous constraints to make one person as a hero then their assertion might be plausible.
However, since we have advanced technology to process lots of information with superb speed, the process can be shorten and a decision to make one person as a hero can be made out in a short time. For instance, if one boy is kidnapped by a stranger, then people in the area will be noticed by an emergency service via a message through their mobile phones. If one citizen spotted the stranger, and report his location to authorities to capture the stranger then the citizen is deserved to be called as a hero. In the past, we did not have same number of crimes and we did not have enough technology to solve the crime. In addition, in the past, numerous detectives or officers were regarded as a hero when they catch criminals. Hence, due to poor technology, layperson or a citizen were hard to contribute to close the case but nowadays due to the advanced technology, providing an aid to authorities become much more easier with highly valued information. Therefore, any people can help to solve a crime, and it is obvious to call them as a hero.
Moreover, if people noticed one citizen saved a child from a suffocation through a social network service, then every user would put "like" to the post and the post will be famous to inform everyone in the service in the end. In the past, if a same event was occurred then it must be hard to collect an information regard the savior. However, nowadays, it is very easy to gather the related information because the savior's friends will post his information on the Internet to show an appreciation to the savior, and they will start to call him as a hero because they have evidence and many people who appreciate his kind moves to save the child. Like this, due to the advanced technology, any living people can be a hero.
It is possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as a hero because of advanced technology unlike the past. In the past, the process to verifying information and gathering evidence to make one person to a hero was difficult but with the technology, it become even more easier and convenient. Therefore, people should try to help others actively, if they want to be a hero in the society,
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 448, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...o. Moreover, if they want to evaluate a persons behavior in a historical view then, it ...
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Line 5, column 915, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...iding an aid to authorities become much more easier with highly valued information. Therefo...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 507, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... on the Internet to show an appreciation to the savior, and they will start to ca...
^^
Line 9, column 266, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
...s difficult but with the technology, it become even more easier and convenient. Theref...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 278, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...but with the technology, it become even more easier and convenient. Therefore, people shoul...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 19.5258426966 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 12.4196629213 177% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 79.0 58.6224719101 135% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2785.0 2235.4752809 125% => OK
No of words: 605.0 442.535393258 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60330578512 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.95951083803 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67207043044 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 215.323595506 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.413223140496 0.4932671777 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 927.9 704.065955056 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.2625546943 60.3974514979 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.590909091 118.986275619 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 23.4991977007 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 5.21951772744 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174270680883 0.243740707755 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714538030552 0.0831039109588 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0787217598128 0.0758088955206 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124284942091 0.150359130593 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484341189569 0.0667264976115 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 14.1392134831 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 48.8420337079 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.1743820225 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 12.1639044944 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 100.480337079 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.