Laws should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances,times and places.
Laws are present to maintain an order in the society. But sometimes these laws need to be challenged in different circumstances, times and places to impart proper justice. It cannot be rigid all the time.
Rigid laws have a lot of flaws.For example, a country where stealing something counts for thievery and thus the law states that the hand needs to be decapicitated. This kind of law is ridiculous as by this logic if some kid steals a pencil would have violated the law. Surely, such circumstances needs to be taken into account and thus the law must be revised. Morever considering such circumstances would generate a list of amended laws that could be useful in similar situations.
There are still some laws that are continuing from ages i.e have not been changed or modified since the medieval era. Such laws are not applicable to our time and age. As the culture and mindset has gone a significant change, we can say that medieval laws would be more restrictive and now as the world has become more open, accessible and accepting to new ideas -- these medieval laws would not hold the same acceptibility in this era.
In this open era where people love to travel and explore the world, people tend to go to countries that are mysterious and seem attractive. In some cases it is observed that these travellers are caught in some crime that was unintentional as they were not aware of the norms in that country. The culture is different everywhere, so something normal in your country may not be the same in the other culture -- it may be forbidden in their culture. But the law is applied to everyone therefore a foreigner is treated the same, who was not aware of such law. Thus such condition must be taken into account and the law must be accordingly amended.
In sum, the laws should be implemented and modified by taking circumstances , times and places into consideration. Some laws remain universal i.e cannot be challenged for example, law that are applicable when someone commits a heinous crime like murder etc. These laws are necessary to maintain order in the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, if, may, so, still, therefore, thus, for example, kind of, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.5258426966 154% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1736.0 2235.4752809 78% => OK
No of words: 362.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7955801105 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69895693731 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502762430939 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6587253741 60.3974514979 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4444444444 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1111111111 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.21951772744 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250643011329 0.243740707755 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.091779114938 0.0831039109588 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056199809326 0.0758088955206 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157034291731 0.150359130593 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410145753784 0.0667264976115 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 100.480337079 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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