Laws should not be rigid or fixed. Instead, they should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places.
Laws are guides which governs a speculated number of people and are meant to be obeyed at every point in time. The flexibility of laws should be encouraged because of different circumstances that surrounds the particular situation.
As we all know, In a country where there is no law, automatically there won't be a corresponding punishment or offence in such country which could lead to endangered lives, properties and businesses. Laws can be flexible in a scenario where the crime is committed unintentionally; For example my cousin who was in her early 20's was robbed in her apartment and was at the verge of been raped by an intruder but she was able to defend herself by smashing the rapist head with an iron, during the process of self defense, the attacker was unconscious and later died. In that situation, will we say she has broken the law for killing a human being who is unknown to be a rapist? Or we will rather say she killed a human being to save her precious life.
In that case, even if it was taken to court that she broke the law to save her life, therefore she can't be held hostage.
Events happen unintentionally at different places and time, laws can only be enforced but should not be rigid, there should be flexibility due to the circumstances that surrounds such action and no one should be blamed.
Rigidity of laws can cause a great harm to a lot of support that could have been made. For example, I was sick during my penultimate year in school and was admitted in the hospital taking medications and responding to treatment , at this time my course-mates were submitting reports and write-ups which counts as the performance and examination for that year. The law says if any student doesn't participate in the report writing and submission, then it would automatically count as an extra year for such student; meaning the student has failed that year and it implies that while my course-mates are graduating, I will still have an extra year, but based on my past performance to my studies, relationship with my lecturers and advisor, and also character wise and voluntary works, the law was made flexible and I was granted more time to recover from my sickness and submit my writeup which I did and was glad to graduate with my course-mates. What if the law was rigid and not flexible? What if I wasn't granted more time? Would I have had an extra year due to a natural sickness which I had no control over?
These are questions that flexibility in laws answers. I was able to graduate because the authorities were understanding enough to bend rules.
Conclusively, Laws should be made flexible due to the situation, challenge, time, circumstances in which we find ourselves that we have no control over.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, then, therefore, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 37.0 19.5258426966 189% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.3162921348 186% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 33.0505617978 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2267.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 479.0 442.535393258 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73277661795 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67825486995 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85271480713 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 215.323595506 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488517745303 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 709.2 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 135.614556588 60.3974514979 225% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 133.352941176 118.986275619 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1764705882 23.4991977007 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58823529412 5.21951772744 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299502659722 0.243740707755 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125386112876 0.0831039109588 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119187756731 0.0758088955206 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200868250555 0.150359130593 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140971928865 0.0667264976115 211% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 100.480337079 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.