Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
As it is said that men and women are the wheels of the same mechanism, one cannot move along without the other.
The above claim is based on the assumption that some tasks are not equally suited for men and women due to their physical difference. The author has given this statement based on the above assumption, but this statement is overstated due to following reasons.
First and foremost question is why we have this connotation of difference between men and women. There is always a heretical thinking, where women are considered as sophisticated and critical being suited only as a homemaker. Being a homemaker requires equal strength and vigor as compare to the other work done by men in other field.
Men and women have different physical ability due to their different physical structure. A women can become a mother and men cannot due to their different physical structure. On the other hand a women cannot become mother without the help of father due to its different physical ability. If we consider Astronauts,Sunita williams being a women went into the space and did all the work which is done by the men in the space irrespective of physical difference.
There is a fallacy that men are superior in terms of team player, leadership and therefore they are ideally suitable for the role of leading a multinational companies or any venture. Are women not suitable for these position?. The answer is yes, If we look into today's world, we would see that women are completely giving neck to neck competition to men in every field. They are playing and imminent role as a leader of the company and proving all their qualities of being a team leader and displaying qualities of leadership.
However, there is a partial agreement with authors claim. There are some fields of life which has been dominated by men because the demand for the men is higher than women. Such fields like army, mechanical workers,factory workers etc. These fields requires immense hardship and labor force which has always been believed to be possessed by men.The second reason could also be that, since ages these fields have always been filled up by men and women have not shown much interest in these fields and the pattern is still prevailing. However, in today's progressing world we can see that women have developed their interest in these fields and the numbers are increasing and it will in the future.
In the end, as I have discussed earlier that, physical difference would not impede any human being from achieving his/her goals in life. All the men and women can equally contribute to society with their individual talent,knowledge and spirit, irrespective of their physical difference.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 60, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...question is why we have this connotation of difference between men and women. The...
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Line 6, column 90, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'A woman' or simply 'women'?
Suggestion: A woman; Women
... to their different physical structure. A women can become a mother and men cannot due ...
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Line 6, column 92, Rule ID: WOMAN_WOMEN[1]
Message: 'woman' is the singular form of 'women'. Consider using 'woman'?
Suggestion: woman
...o their different physical structure. A women can become a mother and men cannot due ...
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Line 6, column 194, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a woman' or simply 'women'?
Suggestion: a woman; women
...t physical structure. On the other hand a women cannot become mother without the help o...
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Line 6, column 196, Rule ID: WOMAN_WOMEN[1]
Message: 'woman' is the singular form of 'women'. Consider using 'woman'?
Suggestion: woman
...physical structure. On the other hand a women cannot become mother without the help o...
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Line 6, column 314, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Sunita
...sical ability. If we consider Astronauts,Sunita williams being a women went into the sp...
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Line 6, column 337, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a woman' or simply 'women'?
Suggestion: a woman; women
...nsider Astronauts,Sunita williams being a women went into the space and did all the wor...
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Line 6, column 339, Rule ID: WOMAN_WOMEN[1]
Message: 'woman' is the singular form of 'women'. Consider using 'woman'?
Suggestion: woman
...ider Astronauts,Sunita williams being a women went into the space and did all the wor...
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Line 10, column 215, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , factory
...uch fields like army, mechanical workers,factory workers etc. These fields requires imme...
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Line 10, column 346, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...ys been believed to be possessed by men.The second reason could also be that, since...
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Line 10, column 677, Rule ID: WILL_IN_THE_FUTURE[1]
Message: Use simply 'will'.
Suggestion: will
...s and the numbers are increasing and it will in the future. In the end, as I have discussed ear...
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Line 12, column 222, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , knowledge
... to society with their individual talent,knowledge and spirit, irrespective of their physi...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'second', 'so', 'still', 'therefore', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.251004016064 0.240241500013 104% => OK
Verbs: 0.172690763052 0.157235817809 110% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0843373493976 0.0880659088768 96% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0441767068273 0.0497285424764 89% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0381526104418 0.0444667217837 86% => OK
Prepositions: 0.122489959839 0.12292977631 100% => OK
Participles: 0.070281124498 0.0406280797675 173% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.71240191411 2.79330140395 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0200803212851 0.030933414821 65% => OK
Particles: 0.00200803212851 0.0016655270985 121% => OK
Determiners: 0.0983935742972 0.0997080785238 99% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0200803212851 0.0249443105267 81% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0100401606426 0.0148568991511 68% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2697.0 2732.02544248 99% => OK
No of words: 454.0 452.878318584 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.94052863436 6.0361032391 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.58838876751 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.328193832599 0.366273622748 90% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.240088105727 0.280924506359 85% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.180616740088 0.200843997647 90% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.116740088106 0.132149295362 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71240191411 2.79330140395 97% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 219.290929204 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.458149779736 0.48968727796 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 50.9520761795 55.4138127331 92% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6194690265 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.619047619 23.380412469 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5016790575 59.4972553346 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.428571429 141.124799967 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.619047619 23.380412469 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.52380952381 0.674092028746 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.94800884956 141% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.21349557522 230% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 45.6278581917 51.4728631049 89% => OK
Elegance: 1.74015748031 1.64882698954 106% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.433175516619 0.391690518653 111% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.164066195177 0.123202303941 133% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.155211144578 0.077325440228 201% => Ideas in sentences are similar.
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.589971866246 0.547984918172 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.184272493092 0.149214159877 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.168313107348 0.161403998019 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0751523938647 0.0892212321368 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.261024364442 0.385218514788 68% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0389141868655 0.0692045440612 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254934732649 0.275328986314 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426846967427 0.0653680567796 65% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.4325221239 105% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88274336283 164% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 7.22455752212 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 8.0 2.70907079646 295% => OK
Total topic words: 21.0 13.5995575221 154% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.