As we know that, inherent abilities are the abilities which are acquired by human beings by their birth. Here, the above statement argue that man and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks. Hence, i do not conceed with this statement: since, there are many works which can be done by both gender, equally. Therefore, all task which are assign to male and female are doesnot necessarily associate with their physical strength.
Furthermore, there are many many tasks which can be done by both gender smoothly without any hindrence. For example, the job like teaching, in which both gender are involved, can be done by both men and women; since physical differences doesnot make women or men less capable for this job, but mental sharpness does. Consequentially, we can conclude there are many tasks which can de with equally effort by both gender.
Besides these all, the mountain climbing is one of the most hardest job which require a lot of strength and courage to complete it. Many people devoid of leg also have climb the Mt. Everest- world highest mountain.
Men and women both have climb the moutain: hence, we can say that it is not worthwhile to compare the suitability of men and women for the tasks, on the basisof, their physical differences.
Although, the strength of the men and women are different, they both can do the same task smoothly. While men can be good att one work, likewise, women can be good at another work. we can see that, looking after a baby is also a very difficult task. The mentality of people is based on that only mother can care their children with great care: but this is presumptous because in the absence of mother, father can take care of the children very nicely. As, a result we can see equality on same tasks.
While, there are also some tasks which require a great strength, at that tasks people who have disabilituies cannot perfome well, so we can concluse that men and women who have physical disabilities differ in their work not trhose who have physical differences.
Therefore, in a conclusion, We can say that work effectives depend on the strenth of people not on their physical differences. Like men, women have also done many tasks which need great energy and courage, so they are equally sited for many tasks, but not for all tasks.
- College students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field 58
- Men and women because of their inherent physical differences are not equally suited for many tasks 50
- In this age of intensive media coverage it is no longer possible for a society to regard any woman or man as a hero The reputation of anyone who is subjected to media scrutiny will eventually be diminished 66
- In this age of intensive media coverage it is no longer possible for a society to regard any woman or man as a hero The reputation of anyone who is subjected to media scrutiny will eventually be diminished 66
- In order to become well rounded individuals all college students should be required to take courses in which they read poetry novels mythology and other types of imaginative literature Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agre 70
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, hence, if, likewise, look, so, therefore, well, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.3162921348 177% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1957.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 407.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80835380835 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47316062811 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.464373464373 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 610.2 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.683112272 60.3974514979 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.722222222 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6111111111 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.21951772744 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.396034662366 0.243740707755 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136136281885 0.0831039109588 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115807197233 0.0758088955206 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215370408328 0.150359130593 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0993642467515 0.0667264976115 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.