Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
The stance presented, bridges a relationship between men and women and their ability to perform a particular task. It is opined that physical differences is a factor that is responsible for creating a gap for doing work. I partially disagree to the opinion since men and women both have different body types it not only depends on the basis of gender but it might differ from person to person, within the comparison of all females or all males.
First of all, the notion that men and women are different and cannot do the same work, just because women are weaker is absolutely incorrect. Though there are physical differences in both the genders, one should not generalize the given stated idea of 'not equally suitable for work'. The prosaic opinion on women have now been changed since many girls have proved to be equally worthy and equally suitable for any work as men. Say for example, sports was considered a field where boys were considered to have more strength than women such has in the field of boxing, but this stance of people was proven wrong by Mary Kom, the best female boxing champion till date.
Secondly, apart from considering the sports field many other fields such as education where Malala broke all the barriers and surpassed all the obstacles, becoming an imspiration to many girls. The field of labour is one such field where physical differences may become a factor of comparison, because men of the past, made a societal norm that women should take care of the house and the men should work outside and provide money to the family, but this mindset gradually declines as many industries employed women labourers.
Be it a field of showcasing strength or will power, women kept abreast with men. Education, sports, construction (labour), medicine, engineering, in all these fields women and men both proved their worth by merit. With time, evolution of technology, evolution of mindset created a major difference and weakened the opinion that women and men cannot perform all the tasks equally due to inherent physical differences.
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- Men and women because of their inherent physical differences are not equally suited for many tasks 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 416, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y due to inherent physical differences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, apart from, for example, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1719.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 347.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95389048991 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53585603327 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536023054755 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.5869809949 60.3974514979 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.25 118.986275619 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.9166666667 23.4991977007 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41666666667 5.21951772744 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.418432199022 0.243740707755 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159923850138 0.0831039109588 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666146373423 0.0758088955206 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.259754518728 0.150359130593 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446271239461 0.0667264976115 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 14.1392134831 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 48.8420337079 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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