Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
The topic raises the issue that men and women are not equally suited for many task. First of all we need to get out of our parochial mind that men and women are different from each other. Womens are exceling in every field and are at par with men whatsoever the job is.
It is not right to conclude such absurd things, there are physical differences but that doesn't account that they are not suited.
Be it any profession women are setting a benchmark. Women today are doctors, engineers, astraunaut and standing head to head with men. The word 'many' in the statement is something not acceptable. However there are few tasks which requires labourious work such as construction work and other streams where physical effort is required. Field work which demand labourious physical work is somewhere women are not as efficient as men, but over there also we have seen women working efficiently with their full efficiency. The reason could have been anything may be they are the only bread earner for their family.
Women have also ventured into politics and turned out to be a great leaders. Even the first prime minister of india was Mrs Indira Gandhi who had set marks and helped india in crucial time. Therese May, Prime Minister of UK is being in power since last seven years. Public must have seen her work and effort what she had been putting for the upliftment of the nation must have re-elected her for the same reason.
Indisputbaly, in corporate world as well women are ascenting with a great speed. It was earlier women were not allowed to work, so we never came to know about the exceptional talent they had. Otherwise they are no less then men. Indria Nui, CEO- Pepsi Group is at the apex position since last 15 years. Even in armed forces women have made their way, and are the pride of nation. Women turned out to be excelling in even in the field of medical, recently in US was citied in the survey that 57 percent of the doctors are women, also in the immigration awards women entitled for the award were more than men. Kaplna chawla- First women to go to space, proved that we are equally good. Sunita Williams is the only 'human' to have lived in the space for longest.
In the end I would generally disagree with opinion that Men and Women, because of their physical difference, are not equally suited for many tasks. There are some as mentioned but we cannot extrapolate this as a difference and need to chnage our mindness.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 74, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun task seems to be countable; consider using: 'many tasks'.
Suggestion: many tasks
...en and women are not equally suited for many task. First of all we need to get out of our...
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Line 3, column 89, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...there are physical differences but that doesnt account that they are not suited. Be i...
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Line 4, column 112, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: head-to-head
...ors, engineers, astraunaut and standing head to head with men. The word many in the statemen...
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Line 4, column 195, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... statement is something not acceptable. However there are few tasks which requires labo...
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Line 4, column 553, Rule ID: MAY_BE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'maybe' (=perhaps)?
Suggestion: maybe
...cy. The reason could have been anything may be they are the only bread earner for thei...
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Line 6, column 69, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'leader'?
Suggestion: leader
...o politics and turned out to be a great leaders. Even the first prime minister of india...
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Line 8, column 193, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Otherwise,
... about the exceptional talent they had. Otherwise they are no less then men. Indria Nui, ...
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Line 8, column 220, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[2]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...nt they had. Otherwise they are no less then men. Indria Nui, CEO- Pepsi Group is at...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, then, well, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 38.0 19.5258426966 195% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2017.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 436.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62614678899 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28771153418 2.79657885939 82% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 215.323595506 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529816513761 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 636.3 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.4685954232 60.3974514979 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0416666667 118.986275619 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.04166666667 5.21951772744 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.83258426966 290% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341944513225 0.243740707755 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0956756952415 0.0831039109588 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120460836961 0.0758088955206 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191051162545 0.150359130593 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122691898671 0.0667264976115 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 14.1392134831 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 12.1639044944 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 100.480337079 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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