The topic that was mentioned in the above statement was that women are not suited for many tasks. We are living in the 20 century that both men and women are looked equally. The point that men and women are different and they are not suited for the many tasks has to be removed from our minds. In many counties the percentage of educated and employed immediately after the education was women.
coming to our country the women Indra Gandhi had become the prime minister of our country and made the powerfull decisions that men cant do and kept the India pride in higher standards. We won the many wars against Pakistan's in the period of the Indra Gandhi, that was the powerfull thing that happened in the time of Indra Gandhi only. Not only in India there are many counties like Srilanka, Uk and many other countries in the world were ruled by the women ad=nd got the immense development in the culture and in many factors.
Not only the rulers nowadays women are playing major roles in many other important factors also like a doctor, engineering, astronauts, etc.in many countries the more than 50percent of doctors are also women and the major part of engineers in the many counties are women. the women are selected for the majority of the jobs because they will perform the job in accurate, with more perfect and with more concentration.
Yes, there are some jobs that women cant do like lifting heavy things during work hours,doing the extra work like ovw=er nights mainly married women and another some jobs that are accepted, but in many parts of the world where the women is the only one who was maintaining or running the family they are working this kind of heavy jobs also to run there families.
The final conclusion of this topic is that Nowadays the both men and women are equal and performing equal skils in all kinds of jobs that a man can do. So, we cant able to consider the inherent physical difference are not equally for many tasks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, as to, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1623.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 350.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63714285714 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24853512405 2.79657885939 80% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474285714286 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.9086283757 60.3974514979 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.25 118.986275619 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1666666667 23.4991977007 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.21951772744 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347003792257 0.243740707755 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143092354993 0.0831039109588 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0860972162915 0.0758088955206 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200734158666 0.150359130593 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105453147044 0.0667264976115 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 14.1392134831 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 100.480337079 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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