Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
In today's world, women are stepping up and trying to be like men in every aspect which has given rise to equality. In the past, women were treated as inferior and were only considered good enough to do household chores and take care of children. But nowadays women are progressing on such a great extent that you can see them trying to do their best in every part of sector.
Women and men are different and each of them has their pros and cons but we cannot consider them to be inferior due to that. Yes men are stronger than women which makes them more appropriate for doing labor or any task which requires a lot of strength. Men can also do manual work more efficiently because of their strength. A man working at a construction site will be working more effectively than a women. So yes for physical tasks men will be better than women.
But that doesn't mean that women can't do any tasks. Although women are not very strong they are good multitasking individuals and they have a greater potential to bear pain in their own way. If women work in a environment where they have to do many task simultaneously they will do it very efficiently. Women are also smart and can analyse a situation very well.So women can be good in fields where they need to apply brains and use their smartness.
This thing doesn't mean that men are not smart.The above explanation about men's strength doesn't mean that women are not strong. We cannot generalize anything based on their gender There are some women who are stronger than men and some men who can do multitasking better than women. If a person trains himself well he can do any task efficiently.
So just generalizing the tasks based on gender is not right. Every individual is different and just him being a weaker gender shouldn't be the judging factor for his efficiency on some kind of tasks. Yes there are physical differences between men and women. But if a women trains herself well even she can do a task that needs physical strength. So yes both the genders have their advantages and disadvantages but if they are hardworking and determined to do some task efficiently they can do it very well by training themselves. So both men and women can be equally suited for any task inspite of their inherent physical difference .
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...do their best in every part of sector. Women and men are different and each of...
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...te of their inherent physical difference .
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'well', 'kind of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.215277777778 0.240241500013 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.180555555556 0.157235817809 115% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0833333333333 0.0880659088768 95% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0763888888889 0.0497285424764 154% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0717592592593 0.0444667217837 161% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.106481481481 0.12292977631 87% => OK
Participles: 0.0462962962963 0.0406280797675 114% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.53714712472 2.79330140395 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0231481481481 0.030933414821 75% => OK
Particles: 0.00231481481481 0.0016655270985 139% => OK
Determiners: 0.0717592592593 0.0997080785238 72% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0324074074074 0.0249443105267 130% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0185185185185 0.0148568991511 125% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2306.0 2732.02544248 84% => OK
No of words: 408.0 452.878318584 90% => OK
Chars per words: 5.65196078431 6.0361032391 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.58838876751 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.262254901961 0.366273622748 72% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.176470588235 0.280924506359 63% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.137254901961 0.200843997647 68% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.093137254902 0.132149295362 70% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53714712472 2.79330140395 91% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 219.290929204 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.455882352941 0.48968727796 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 48.9458960093 55.4138127331 88% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6194690265 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.4285714286 23.380412469 83% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6742107267 59.4972553346 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.80952381 141.124799967 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 23.380412469 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.285714285714 0.674092028746 42% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.21349557522 422% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 37.0756302521 51.4728631049 72% => OK
Elegance: 1.11971830986 1.64882698954 68% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.381650121441 0.391690518653 97% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.136702315553 0.123202303941 111% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0886424775596 0.077325440228 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.503830528366 0.547984918172 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.127191202407 0.149214159877 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136476774451 0.161403998019 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721675729744 0.0892212321368 81% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.30431024677 0.385218514788 79% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0328064859066 0.0692045440612 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24291115479 0.275328986314 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677496498355 0.0653680567796 104% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.4325221239 144% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 15.0 7.22455752212 208% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.5995575221 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.