Men and women because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
For many decades there have been constant debates over equal rights for men and women. The foremost reason for people advocating against the same has been the inherent physical differences between men and women. Now, in the 21st century women all over the world are fighting for their right to equality and the very fact that they can work side by side of men in any field.
According to me, women are capable of performing every task that so called superior men can. We have many examples in various fields which were previously considered to be suitable only for men. Take the example of astronauts and pilots. Women are making a mark in these fields and carving a place for themselves with the very few opportunities they are getting.
In India, physical sports like boxing and wrestling were considered to be inappropriate for women due to their physical attributes. But the likes of Mary Kom, Sakshi Malik have made the country proud by winning medals at the Olympics as well as the world level. They have battled every obstacle and showed the world what a women can achieve with passion and hard work and have paved the way for the future generations to do the same.
Though it is true that women are making a mark in all the fields dominated by men, they have certain disadvantages due to their inherent physical differences. In places such as construction sites, mines women have a tad bit of disadvantage given their physical strength. The work rate will be mostly greater in case of men. Due to this, men are always given preferences in such work environments which is not entirely wrong on part of the authorities considering the economic constraints.
Having said this, women can always work on their strength aspect and be at par with the men. Hence the suitability of men and women for tasks is not just dependent on their physical abilities but the skills and work ethic of every individual.
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- Men and women because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In 50
- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...rk side by side of men in any field. According to me, women are capable of performing every ...
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... few opportunities they are getting. In India, physical sports like boxing an...
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...very obstacle and showed the world what a women can achieve with passion and hard work ...
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...ry obstacle and showed the world what a women can achieve with passion and hard work ...
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...e future generations to do the same. Though it is true that women are making ...
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... considering the economic constraints. Having said this, women can always work ...
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Suggestion: Hence,
...ngth aspect and be at par with the men. Hence the suitability of men and women for ta...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, well, such as, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 2235.4752809 71% => OK
No of words: 332.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79819277108 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53834542345 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527108433735 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5357641956 60.3974514979 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5625 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5625 5.21951772744 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248860199433 0.243740707755 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0945569578028 0.0831039109588 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528965251927 0.0758088955206 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154882069076 0.150359130593 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415099273488 0.0667264976115 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.1392134831 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 100.480337079 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.