Some people believe that because of the inherent physical differences between men and women , there are many tasks which aren't equally suited for men and women . This might not be the case anymore because although there are many distinct differences between physical conditions of men and those of women, causing some tasks just suited to men and some only to women, there are still many tasks that both men and women have the same ability to master.
First , there are truly some tasks that are suited for just one sex . For example , men , even if they wanted cannot give birth to a child . Women on the other hand have the ability to give birth and also have the organs needed to give birth and support the child after birth thus providing him/her with food . Whereas without the help of a man women cannot give birth to a child . Thus there are some gender specific tasks that the other gender cannot do .
Second , in this age of competition and education , neither men nor women have been left behind . With quality education both men and women have been suited for the top positions in a company and there isn't a thing that one can do and other cant . For example , CEO's of top firms in the company are both men and women these days . As a result, many tasks we thought just suited for men may equally fitted for women.
Finally , as far as the household tasks are considered , it was considered that the job of a woman is to stay at home and look after these household chores . But with both of them working it has become really difficult for women to manage her day jobs as well as do all the household chores once they get back home after work . Thus , men readily help their wives in all household activities form cleaning utensils to cooking .
In the end, although the physical differences do exist and result in some distinct abilities to do some tasks, there are many other jobs are equally well suited for men and women, despite the prejudice about the old stereotypes of men and women. As a consequence, in so many circumstances, we should treat men and women with equal respect, requiring them for equal efforts.
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- Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to add 50
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, look, may, really, second, so, still, thus, well, whereas, for example, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1742.0 2235.4752809 78% => OK
No of words: 379.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5963060686 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24934614662 2.79657885939 80% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.440633245383 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 554.4 704.065955056 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.2257858789 60.3974514979 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.875 118.986275619 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6875 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0625 5.21951772744 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 7.80617977528 372% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248702798605 0.243740707755 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0962457413098 0.0831039109588 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813548404576 0.0758088955206 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152339159288 0.150359130593 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0818167293582 0.0667264976115 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 12.1639044944 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.38706741573 85% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 100.480337079 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.