Some people believe that a nation should not require its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college. Whereas, taking the same national curriculum possesses its own benefits over not having one. Thus, I personally feel that a nation should require its students to study the same national curriculum. However there might be some cases where a unified curriculum could prove to be waste.
First, the same national curriculum could serve as the base of assessing the skills of all the different students. For example, colleges could use academic performances of the students to assess them or distinguish them from each other. Using this distinguishing factor they can give admissions to deserving students. Thus, same national curriculum could be advantageous in this situation.
Second, a national curriculum is often well crafted. The ones creating the curriculum keep in mind that different students may develop different tastes. With regards to this Education committee in India developed a curriculum that includes subjects such as English, Math, Science, History etc which grows in difficulty / depth as the grade increases. In the processes of learning all these subjects students often figure out the field they are interested in. Thus, a common curriculum can help one find their specific field of interest.
However, one might argue that a national curriculum should focus only on the field of interest of the student. For example many parents in India want their son/daughter to crack their IIT / JEE exam that you need to take after your twelfth grade. So they argue that subjects of this exam should be taught since 5th standard in the schools. Ignoring the fact that their child's interest. Even if one has found the interest of studying for IIT that early, enforcing this curriculum on every other student is wrong since they may have different aspirations.
While there are a lot of reasons to say that a nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college, there are also reasons for not doing so. Therefore a curriculum should be well drafted keeping everyone's interest in mind.
- The first step to self-knowledge is rejection of the familiar. 75
- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college. 50
- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college. 50
- Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to add 50
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, while, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 14.8657303371 7% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1832.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 353.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18980169972 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63148048553 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524079320113 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.0555551703 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.65 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 5.21951772744 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.559368956786 0.243740707755 229% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.187665417106 0.0831039109588 226% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.221206374343 0.0758088955206 292% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.357045252398 0.150359130593 237% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.220264236666 0.0667264976115 330% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 100.480337079 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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