Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The physiologies of men and women are similar yet significantly different at the same time. They involve a list of common bodily functions, and some entirely gender-unique characteristics such as menstruation in women. The differences become much more pronounced after puberty, when both the body and mind begin to mature and develop. The results are multifold, but complex and subtler than is normally perceived. Let us now analyze the position of women in society from the beginning.
When man was not yet "civilized", and only knew to care for his primal needs like hunger, thirst, sleep and carnal instincts, leading to propagation of species, there was no concept of "marriage". Mating was as organic as the other functions; and other than the obvious positions of either gender in this process, man and woman performed the same basic functions. They both helped in hunting food, cooking it, or gathering it from nature, and also both were equally involved in the protection of weaker individuals within their circle, belonging to either sex. Women were thus "equal" to men in every respect. Then eventually, there came the concept of monogamy and then, possibly with the development of religion, though on a primitive level, there came the concept of cementing the ties between mates using the ceremony known as marriage. Slowly, after this, the roles of the woman became centered more on the activities inside the house, and the men took up those outside.
The physical strengths of either sex were quite comparable, and yet the division slowly broadened them to the degree where women were apparently required only for the "lighter" tasks, and slowly, that became their belief and identity. Over the centuries, man has attempted to limit the roles of women to domestic ones, fearful of losing his supreme status in society, gilding this with the promise of "safety", but women have eventually grown out of such bounds, proving time and again that they are capable in every respect, and more, than man in every possible kind of activity. From wrestling, boxing, sword-fight, gunmanship, weight-lifting as well as other martial arts used for combat or sport, to even higher risk activities such as those of mountaineers and astronauts, women have proved their mettle again and again by displaying consistent brilliance. On the other side, literature has seen a vast number of female writers and poets, who have been acclaimed and successful worldwide, sometimes posthumously due to the societal restrictions of patriarchy. Some of the top programmers and coders in the world have been women; for instance, Lord Byron's daughter.
The societies that we name as "uncivilized", i.e. tribal and other such groups still employ the ways of the ancient men, and so their women were, and still are, equal and sometimes greater in status to men, especially in matriarchies. Even though the thinking processes of men and women are fundamentally different due to difference in brain wiring - men box everything down into small compartments in their brains, whereas women connect everything to everything else, often linking this with emotion of some sort, which proves helpful for better memory, and also a difference in perspective and greater eye for detail - they are equally suited to almost all kinds of activities in physical and mental strength, and women only fall short of doing so by lack of confidence drilled into them since centuries of "civilization".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, if, so, still, then, thus, well, whereas, for instance, kind of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 12.4196629213 0% => OK
Conjunction : 38.0 14.8657303371 256% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 83.0 58.6224719101 142% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2972.0 2235.4752809 133% => OK
No of words: 561.0 442.535393258 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29768270945 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.86676880123 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24148470671 2.79657885939 116% => OK
Unique words: 318.0 215.323595506 148% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566844919786 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 923.4 704.065955056 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 15.0 1.77640449438 844% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 31.0 23.0359550562 135% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 125.877573778 60.3974514979 208% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 165.111111111 118.986275619 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.1666666667 23.4991977007 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94444444444 5.21951772744 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13586766808 0.243740707755 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0402387993955 0.0831039109588 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337737141511 0.0758088955206 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0867060692525 0.150359130593 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389632711626 0.0667264976115 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 14.1392134831 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 48.8420337079 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.1743820225 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.38706741573 117% => OK
difficult_words: 165.0 100.480337079 164% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 11.2143820225 128% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.