Research is the fundamental part of innovation, and innovation is the core of the
growth of any firm, government or community. So investments in research are propitious investments.
Research for alternative fuel source of gasoline can make great things happen, like, an electric car can solve problems of pollution, and also we would no longer have to rely on the limited
resources like gasoline, diesel, charcoal. Research when gets significant positive results can solve some
major problems like getting the cure for many critical diseases, better algorithms can make computations faster
and efficient. Even if research done in order to achieve some specific objective, fails, we always get to
learn something. For example, Due to lack of hardware supporting high computational power we
were not able to implement the algorithms that had the potential to solve large problems. But now with the results of latest researches, we are capable of solving many problems.
Sometimes research done with intent to achieve objectives which are highly ambitious and not pragmatic
can cause waste of time, energy, and money. Rather than involving in such type of research activity, Many problems that don't need any immediate research can be solved. By solving such problems money can be used
appropriately. for example, Gates foundation instead of spending most of its money on research, is using it
to cure diseases like polio from Africa. Using the money to address problems which already has solutions is some times wiser than finding more optimal and speculative solution. Reseach does'nt bring good results with it
alway, when used in wrong manner can become cataclysm, i.e. Invention of atomic bomb, took millions
of innocent lives when used.
Eventually, one thing that is irrifutable is that research is good investment, but only if results are
concievable and pragmatic. Money should be used for both research and the problems which can be addressed
which does'nt require research, so this way we shall seek balanced approch for this issue.
- Children over the age of 15 should be allowed to vote. 60
- Money spent on research is almost always a good investment even when the results of that research are controversial 55
- Those who see their ideas through, regardless of doubts or criticism others may express, are the ones who tend to leave a lasting legacy. 62
- When schools do not have enough funding or teachers, some people think physical education classes should be cut, while others believe that courses in art and music should be eliminated first. Which do you think is preferable, and why? 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 33.0505617978 42% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1748.0 2235.4752809 78% => OK
No of words: 326.0 442.535393258 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36196319018 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74385431418 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598159509202 0.4932671777 121% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4272908248 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.533333333 118.986275619 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7333333333 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.21951772744 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 17.0 4.97078651685 342% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293308671977 0.243740707755 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106911621227 0.0831039109588 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632844119161 0.0758088955206 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10216514568 0.150359130593 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694451776504 0.0667264976115 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 14.1392134831 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.