The most essential quality of an effective leader is the ability to remain consistently committed to particular principles and objectives. Any leader who is quickly and easily influenced by shifts in popular opinion will accomplish little."
Principals, values and firm belief make a strong and influential leader. It is only principals which hold still with an individual while we grow up and learn to follow them right from a childhood. A righteous person will always adhere to rules, objectives which are considered beneficial for everyone. There is a very popular saying that "a man should be man of his words"; we can't trust someone who believed in one thing at one point of time and diverted to other thing in the very next moment. If a person's belief is not immutable, then it implies he is not clear about his thoughts and perspective in his own mind. How can we rely on someone who does not have strong stand on his/her purview? This is like hitting on the dart while we are blindfolded and society does not work in this fashion. There should be consistency in leadership mannerism.
Leadership requires strong many qualities like integrity, develop confidence among his followers. A sense of confidence can only be developed when we know that our leader will bring prosperity among us, promote the salubrious of others; which can only happen when we know that our leader's agenda is well considered. Consider an example of Mahatma Gandhi, he strongly believed in non-violence and struggled a long way to fight against east India company to bring freedom to his nation. If his thought would had oscillated or flickered by opinions of others then was it possible for Gandhi to bring freedom?
Any idea or suggestion by others could be effective for their own circumstances; we can't apply the same opinion to our condition without analyzing and measuring the pros and cons of it. Applying the series of changes to organization and society would make it unstable and could be deleterious to the progress of the society. Consider a case on some startup IT organization, where there is no sort of organized, planned policies and does not pay much attention to meticulous details about governing policy of the organization then there is a great chance of risks, failures, and low revenues of the company; on the contrary if we see a well-established multinational firm then it is very obsequious that they must be following some policies like integrity, stewardship, client vale etc. These policies are the building blocks and act as base pillar which emboldens the quality there serve to the client or customer.
There is no denying of fact that adaption to the new surroundings are also necessary which gives motion to new developments and help in flourishing the better notion, however if the provisional and rudimentary proposal are applied within a short period of span then it could lead to unstable environment.
Therefore to achieve stature of accomplishments in life, there is need of well thought idea and consistency in the objectives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'manned'?
Suggestion: manned
...pular saying that 'a man should be man of his words'; we can't trust...
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Message: Did you mean ''?
...t work in this fashion. There should be consistency in leadership mannerism. Leadership re...
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Line 2, column 451, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (India) must be used with a third-person verb: 'companies'.
Suggestion: companies
... a long way to fight against east India company to bring freedom to his nation. If his ...
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Line 2, column 512, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...dom to his nation. If his thought would had oscillated or flickered by opinions of ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...it could lead to unstable environment. Therefore to achieve stature of accomplishments i...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'still', 'then', 'therefore', 'well', 'while', 'sort of', 'on the contrary']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.242937853107 0.238963963785 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.156308851224 0.154291517835 101% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0790960451977 0.0886310499679 89% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0508474576271 0.0506014161523 100% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0564971751412 0.0449626384858 126% => OK
Prepositions: 0.114877589454 0.123526278965 93% => OK
Participles: 0.0338983050847 0.0379742944744 89% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.95598360654 2.82910677849 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.030131826742 0.0316879551592 95% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0014075125626 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.075329566855 0.0950106342287 79% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0282485875706 0.0245489744465 115% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0207156308851 0.0157978311181 131% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2848.0 2899.98275862 98% => OK
No of words: 473.0 478.390804598 99% => OK
Chars per words: 6.02114164905 6.0591788892 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66353547975 4.65681771538 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.346723044397 0.369966551584 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.279069767442 0.285172536893 98% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.202959830867 0.207245337619 98% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.145877378436 0.136322040163 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95598360654 2.82910677849 104% => OK
Unique words: 262.0 234.298850575 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553911205074 0.492565540709 112% => OK
Word variations: 67.2465089956 56.8184620615 118% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 21.1264367816 85% => OK
Sentence length: 26.2777777778 23.7468607788 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 94.6979115105 62.0618507366 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.222222222 143.81877709 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2777777778 23.7468607788 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.611111111111 0.728815259664 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.87931034483 102% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.71264367816 65% => OK
Readability: 54.184754522 52.2641144681 104% => OK
Elegance: 1.48571428571 1.64547068916 90% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.38901930096 0.39480681544 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.133149639881 0.11556216369 115% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0680232176068 0.0736162880345 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.514854057262 0.531340600358 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.227041127332 0.15197228837 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140063875334 0.158818324754 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0762584734703 0.0851127212816 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.307845226494 0.388921930462 79% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0645826000489 0.0677916285025 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251521782118 0.28015025965 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407449070504 0.0610219844235 67% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.8591954023 111% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30459770115 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.96264367816 40% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.10632183908 136% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.93390804598 76% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.04597701149 33% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 15.0862068966 99% => OK
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 4.5 Out of 6