A person with the ability to remain constrain with his dogged principle and objectives has a colossal buoyant impact in the society. It depends on individual whether to maintain that ability or discard it. The prompt states that to be an effective leader, the quality to remain consistent in particular principles and objectives is a most. In my prospect, i strongly agree with the prompt and here are the three reasons in support.
To begin with, a leader have to bear certain qualities to give justice to his position. The essential qualities they acquire in them will lead them to a better path and off course, help them play a role model for other people so that they can be the source for inspiration. A leader carrying a dogged principle and objective in his head can never be agitated by the external factor that try to dissipate them. Let us take an example of Mahatma Gandhi , who strongly believed in non-violence and struggled a long way to fight against east Indian company to bring freedom in India. Moreover he was so determined in his principle that no one could shake him and stop him from acquiring his dream.
Secondly , a man with certain goals and objectives is always devoted towards his works. He/she tries the best out of everything to fulfill their objective. A great scientist Galileo Galilei can be considered one of the great leader for all the emerging scientist after him. He was so consistent and confident in his findings that people who counterattacked his findings earlier, conceded with his findings later. He had cited a theory that "earth and other planets revolve around the sun, not the sun that revolve around earth." Everyone was against him but later everyone accepted it as the fact was what the scientist had said. Had he been easily influenced by the criticisms and counterattack that came from people, we wouldn`t have been assured in many field of his findings. No one would remember his name by now as a great scientist.
Further, if the leader is found to be ineffectual, then just imagine what can be the condition of the people following them. They can be assumed to be doomed. Moreover, any country, company , institute or any other big organization that are playing a lead role, need to be consistent in their particular principles. If the leader are better, then no doubt the whole body under it, will be better. A country can move towards development if the leaders have effective quality to lead the country meeting the goals nad objectives required for the development of the country. However, remaining consistent to particular principles may be malignant sometimes. There is no warrant that the principle and objectives can be right always. In such case, flexibility and little shifts in the principles can bring a better influence.
In sum, the overall output is always better when a quality leader is controlling the whole coding process. Likewise, the childrens are up brought properly where their parents are effectively playing the role of a leader. In our life too, it depends on every individual whether to be a quality leader with dogged objectives or flexible objectives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, likewise, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, in particular, no doubt, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.5258426966 154% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 33.0505617978 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2631.0 2235.4752809 118% => OK
No of words: 532.0 442.535393258 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9454887218 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80261649409 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78153827811 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 268.0 215.323595506 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503759398496 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 819.0 704.065955056 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.99550561798 220% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.7649331365 60.3974514979 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4444444444 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7037037037 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.03703703704 5.21951772744 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 23.0 10.2758426966 224% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235718563317 0.243740707755 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666447565721 0.0831039109588 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703659877424 0.0758088955206 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141703216281 0.150359130593 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507099616197 0.0667264976115 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 100.480337079 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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