The most ideal path for a society to set up its youngsters for positions of authority in government industry or different fields is by imparting in them a feeling of collaboration, not rivalry.
I partially agree with the given argument of the ideal path for a society is to set up its youngsters for positions of authority in government, industry or different fields is by imparting in them a feeling of collaboration than setting rivalry amongst them.
To begin with, youngsters are the ones who are going to shape the development in a particular country in upcoming future. So, its very important that the youngsters work in collaboration with each other. Also, government and industries are major bodies in the society that are responsible for the development. In such scenario, collaboration is necessary amongst the leaders or authorities that govern the society.
Further, collaboration offers many advantages. Some notable advantages are, collaboration not only leads to development of society but also improves one's personal soft skills such as communication skills, ability to accept and face the challenges, etc. Collaboration leads to pacification of previous quarrels, arguments and conflicts between the individuals. In a nut-shell it leads to a peaceful world. Socio-ethical values also improve and development of a society as a whole occurs.
On the other hand collaboration existing for a very long time can lead to monopoly and saturation in one particular field. It may lead to mass corruption in the governments. It also causes reduction in the competition leading to reduction in growth rate. This may lead to slow degradation and downfall of society.
In conclusion, i would like to add that collaboration up to a limit is good and the youngsters in a society, aspiring for authorities in government or industries or any other fields must be imparted in them a feeling of collaboration. It is not alt all recommended to set up a feeling of rivalry between them as this will not help the development of society as a whole when long term effects are considered. A healthy competition should exist amongst the youngsters than any kind of rivalry.
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also, but, if, may, so, in conclusion, kind of, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 27.0 12.9106741573 209% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1663.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 320.0 442.535393258 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.196875 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27304181678 2.79657885939 117% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515625 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 63.2776602265 60.3974514979 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8235294118 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8235294118 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23529411765 5.21951772744 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.460348026509 0.243740707755 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119166197361 0.0831039109588 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.171952079354 0.0758088955206 227% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.283476298131 0.150359130593 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.236232014698 0.0667264976115 354% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 100.480337079 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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