Imagination is defined as the abstract concept developed by us that defines shape of our thoughts and their capacity. On the other hand, knowledge is established facts and concepts that we learn. The presented claim asserts that in most of the professions and academic fields, imagination is more important than knowledge. However, I believe that without knowledge mere imagination can hardly play a role in any field. Hence I mostly disagree with the claim.
To begin with, it is true that imagination does play a crucial role in many fields such as arts and literature. In these fields, creator has to indulge in his own mind-palace and explore the tremendous possible figments of his thoughts.Even imagination does play a major role in scientific realm as well. Quoting Einstein, knowledge can only get you from A to B but Imagination can take you anywhere. If inventors do not imagine, they are very likely to follow accomplished trends and thought processes. However, when one tries to imagine what are their other possibilities other than the traditional ones, he opens himself a door to mighty world of imagination. For instance, had Wright brothers not imagined that humans can travel in the sky just like birds, they would not have been able to invent aeroplane in first place. Hence, imagination acts as primary step of any new innovation.
However to assert that imagination plays greater role than that of knowledge is completely dubious claim. Without knowledge one can not proceed to achieve what he has imagined. In order to bring imagination into reality, one must be able to understand the working of all the related concepts thoroughly. For example, had Wright brothers only imagined flying in the sky but did not make consistent efforts to create aeroplane then their imagination would have been tantamount to that of poet who always writes about flying in the sky. But they did not stop with just speculating about aeroplace but gained thorough knowledge of physics, aerodynamics and electronics in order to create first flying aerolane. Hence, we can confirm that mere imagination is very less likely to prove beneficial in the absence of related knowledge and conscious action.
In many fields, an imagination hardly plays any role at all. For instance in medical field, doctor must be aware of all body anatomy. He must be proficient is deciphering disease from symptoms. He must also be able to prescribe medicine pertaining to specific illness. As this profession is very precarious as it directly deals with lives of people, doctors has to be sure that his knowledge of the medicines and diseases is through enough. He must, not in any case, diagnose the possible disease based on his sole imagination.
Though some people may argue that imagination plays bigger role in some fields such as poetry and painting, without knowledge of how rhythm works or how to use brush to paint a particular stroke, both poet or painter are very less likely to flourish in their respective fields. Hence,to conclude, knowledge is as important as imagination if not slight more crucial.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, may, so, then, well, as to, for example, for instance, such as, in any case, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 58.6224719101 123% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2588.0 2235.4752809 116% => OK
No of words: 512.0 442.535393258 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0546875 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75682846001 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78290637124 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 265.0 215.323595506 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517578125 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 823.5 704.065955056 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.7680105967 60.3974514979 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5384615385 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6923076923 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11538461538 5.21951772744 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25679292888 0.243740707755 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763093451882 0.0831039109588 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.147375323046 0.0758088955206 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157160833057 0.150359130593 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116781622538 0.0667264976115 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 100.480337079 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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