a nation should require all of its student to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Student should learn the same national curriculum activities until they enter college as it will give the nation a great quantity of qualified student.When its matter of the higer studies before that all student should know the same national curriculam.
A nation progress depend on qualified student.And people nature is to learn more thing when they are at early age.In the early age they can learn the national culture and behavoiur easily.Beside this if the curriculum made mandatory to all the student then they can learn the same national value.
Let assume that every student in a nation is not studying the same thing.Then what will happened is that they all will have a lacking in some sector that they don't consume it well.One may agree one thing but other who don't know the fact can disagree with that.There will be different in the choice along the student.
If they are used to the same study they can easily understand other choice and can decide what right and what wrong .The main fact in that there will be no issue of disagreement with the student.And after studying the same curriculum the can easily get what they have learned and what they are good at.When student get along the same thing they can bolster other fact and can help the nation.And there every student will be a helpful source of support.
When the student don't learn the same thing they can't even know what is other is learning and what is the main point they are learning.Although after learning the same thing before college they can choose their own interested subject still they will know by than they should have to learn by their studying by their nation.
So, a nation should require all of its student to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.That will boost them morally and by knowledge.That will help the nation to prosper more.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, still, then, well, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 12.4196629213 185% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 58.6224719101 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 2235.4752809 69% => OK
No of words: 320.0 442.535393258 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.853125 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42156449622 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 215.323595506 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.428125 0.4932671777 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 464.4 704.065955056 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.2370786517 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 23.0359550562 230% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.4978494325 60.3974514979 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 258.833333333 118.986275619 218% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.3333333333 23.4991977007 227% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 5.21951772744 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 7.80617977528 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.508215827546 0.243740707755 209% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.353259393469 0.0831039109588 425% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.186383138466 0.0758088955206 246% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.353259393469 0.150359130593 235% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.186383138466 0.0667264976115 279% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.1 14.1392134831 199% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.14 48.8420337079 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.8 12.1743820225 187% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.74 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 100.480337079 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 23.2 11.2143820225 207% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 23.0 11.7820224719 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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