A Nation should require all of its student to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
The given statement states that a nation should make it compulsory for the schools to study a common curriculum till they pass out and enter college. This regulation for students as well as the schools located across the nation will have its own merits and demerits. To further elucidate the given claim for being agreeable or not this are the example through which it can be judged.
First, the most prominent factor for establishing such a rule is that the government want to clear all the complexities with introduction of several board including some being foreign. Also that government school even after having less fee people select the new high end schools with vast infrastructure and amenities. Hence it would be good for the lower privilege people to study what every other child is studying. There would be no more difference left so that one would not feel lacking behind. Also, people could relate well with each other increasing the flow of knowledge from person to person. Although there would be still schools with more tuition but there would be no difference of the course they are taught, it would be just that the facilities would be better.
Moreover, the curriculum which would be same can increase the chances of regulating a fixed interest to the students where the current status of the research is less. This would help in increasing the number of students who want to pursue a particular field which is still developing say for example aerospace, there is still great amount of undiscovered things left to be researched for better future. This could also be a case where in a general subject taught is common for the people and being similar people tend to get fixed on the subject leading to higher chances for enhanced discoveries .
Also, this has its set of demerits for example if a child is interest in learning a foreign language from beginning but the curriculum does not provide it, so he would have to learn it from outside or take classes. Another example which can be said that if a individual is interested in arts rather than science than the student would fail if he considers pursuing science. Thus, a secondary option should be provided along with the compulsory one to ensure that every talent is consider than being neglected.
To conclude the statement it does not plays justice to the students choice of selection, but this claim can be improved by letting the person select his own subjects. Also it can be improved by selecting some specific subject common for everyone than most of the subject being common.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 142, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun board seems to be countable; consider using: 'several boards'.
Suggestion: several boards
...l the complexities with introduction of several board including some being foreign. Also that...
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Line 5, column 186, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ral board including some being foreign. Also that government school even after havin...
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Line 5, column 320, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...with vast infrastructure and amenities. Hence it would be good for the lower privileg...
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Line 9, column 597, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... higher chances for enhanced discoveries . Also, this has its set of demerits...
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Line 13, column 62, Rule ID: BE_INTEREST_IN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'interested'?
Suggestion: interested
...t of demerits for example if a child is interest in learning a foreign language from beg...
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Line 13, column 258, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...other example which can be said that if a individual is interested in arts rather...
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Line 13, column 480, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'considered'.
Suggestion: considered
...sory one to ensure that every talent is consider than being neglected. To conclude...
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Line 17, column 39, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'play'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: play
... To conclude the statement it does not plays justice to the students choice of selec...
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Line 17, column 39, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'play'
Suggestion: play
... To conclude the statement it does not plays justice to the students choice of selec...
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Line 17, column 168, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ing the person select his own subjects. Also it can be improved by selecting some sp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, moreover, second, so, still, thus, well, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.5258426966 154% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 12.4196629213 169% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2143.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 438.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89269406393 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51681524861 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502283105023 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 646.2 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5037414414 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.058823529 118.986275619 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7647058824 23.4991977007 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47058823529 5.21951772744 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121505771416 0.243740707755 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490174776108 0.0831039109588 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0783925975286 0.0758088955206 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0836482638731 0.150359130593 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0868224967239 0.0667264976115 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.