A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
We are living in the age of jet planes, the world is shrinking everyday and the cultural differences are mitigating rapidly. Its high time that the diversity introduced by the different curriculums by different educational bodies in a country should be eradicated. These diversified curriculums introduce some serious issues.
One major problem is scaling the performance of students. The difference between educational curriculums results in enormous number of data points to consider when it comes to compare students from different curriculum. For example, in India, CBSE curriculum is known to be pretty lenient compared to curriculums of regional state boards when it comes to the work load or the grading doctrine. For securing admission to prestigious engineering institutes like IIT, students need to excel in a nation wide competitive examination and their respective board examinations. CBSE is quite notorious for inflating grades in board examinations. Hence it becomes exponentially difficult for evaluators to bring everyone in the same scale. Similar arguments can be made for jobs in government sectors, where the grades of the board examinations are of paramount importance. A single curriculum would naturally alleviate these problems.
- The following is a memorandum from the business manager of a television station."Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increased time to national news and less time to weather and local news. During this period, most of the complaint 50
- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position 41
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 64, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...e of jet planes, the world is shrinking everyday and the cultural differences are mitiga...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...culums introduce some serious issues. One major problem is scaling the perform...
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Line 3, column 494, Rule ID: NATION_WIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nationwide'?
Suggestion: nationwide
...s like IIT, students need to excel in a nation wide competitive examination and their respe...
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Line 3, column 639, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...inflating grades in board examinations. Hence it becomes exponentially difficult for ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['hence', 'if', 'so', 'for example']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.294117647059 0.240241500013 122% => OK
Verbs: 0.156862745098 0.157235817809 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.122549019608 0.0880659088768 139% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0196078431373 0.0497285424764 39% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0294117647059 0.0444667217837 66% => OK
Prepositions: 0.122549019608 0.12292977631 100% => OK
Participles: 0.0539215686275 0.0406280797675 133% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.18898394566 2.79330140395 114% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0392156862745 0.030933414821 127% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0882352941176 0.0997080785238 88% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0147058823529 0.0249443105267 59% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0147058823529 0.0148568991511 99% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1257.0 2732.02544248 46% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 188.0 452.878318584 42% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.68617021277 6.0361032391 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 4.58838876751 81% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.452127659574 0.366273622748 123% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.382978723404 0.280924506359 136% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.313829787234 0.200843997647 156% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.244680851064 0.132149295362 185% => Too many words length more than 8 chars.
Word Length SD: 3.18898394566 2.79330140395 114% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 219.290929204 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664893617021 0.48968727796 136% => OK
Word variations: 69.7710362521 55.4138127331 126% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6194690265 53% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0909090909 23.380412469 73% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8744805905 59.4972553346 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.272727273 141.124799967 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0909090909 23.380412469 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.363636363636 0.674092028746 54% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.94800884956 40% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.21349557522 77% => OK
Readability: 55.3887814313 51.4728631049 108% => OK
Elegance: 2.28571428571 1.64882698954 139% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37265698502 0.391690518653 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.1013663743 0.123202303941 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0899778686337 0.077325440228 116% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.451074685029 0.547984918172 82% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.169010842892 0.149214159877 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1451573359 0.161403998019 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0814582368458 0.0892212321368 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.274120004991 0.385218514788 71% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0 0.0692045440612 0% => Paragraphs are so close to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.289876104364 0.275328986314 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495991140103 0.0653680567796 76% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.4325221239 29% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.30420353982 113% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88274336283 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 7.22455752212 42% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 13.5995575221 66% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 41.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.5 Out of 6
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