The responsiblities of complusory education include buliding a comprehensive framework about knowledge, ensuring the quality of teaching and guiding students how to find out and develop their own intersets, which are also the advantages of compulsory education over private one.
As for the education system, especially for the schools, requiring all its students to study the same national curriculum before college will make teaching and management more efficient and more affortable. For one thing, by afforing the same curriculum, teachers can share their real-time experience and material, while schools can evalute their students with the same standard. For another thing, organising a specific new course is time-consuming, for teachers need to spend a lot of energy in choosing materials like textbook, building teaching framework and adjusting methods.
As for students, studying the same curriculum required by the nation will equip them with the basic and comprehensive knowledge that prepares them for further development. However, as we all know, students are born unique, which means that they may have different strenghts, learning abilities and interests. If ther are all required to perform well in the courses that they are not suitable for, they may be frustrated about studying, losing their interstes.
In order to balance the conflicts between personal and comprehensive development, schools and students, it would be a good way to
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, well, while, another thing, as for, for another thing, for one thing
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.5258426966 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 58.6224719101 41% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1242.0 2235.4752809 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 221.0 442.535393258 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61990950226 5.05705443957 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.55969084622 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01301749092 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 215.323595506 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62443438914 0.4932671777 127% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 704.065955056 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1412713046 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.25 118.986275619 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.625 23.4991977007 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 5.21951772744 230% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239380889598 0.243740707755 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100561283487 0.0831039109588 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689030454691 0.0758088955206 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116487696452 0.150359130593 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0963464190023 0.0667264976115 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 14.1392134831 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 48.8420337079 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.1639044944 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.38706741573 117% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 100.480337079 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 11.8971910112 134% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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