A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
The argument put forward a recommendation to have a same national curriculum for a whole nation. Argument push for a educational policy, wanting to have same curriculum for each and every student of our nation.
Such curriculum would be beneficial for students who haven't planned the domain of their study. This curriculum will give them better insights. Will make them cogent on choosing their domain of study. A person interested in maths and science would be interested in becoming a engineer than a journalist. Indeed, a student who make correct choice regarding his area of study will be more passionate in his studies during college.
Additionally, colleges will have easier task in vetting students for the seats in the college. It will be much easier to compare a student performance with any other student, as every student studied the same curriculum tantamounting to same subjects.
Nonetheless, there are few loopholes in this recommendation. Such a curriculum have to be broad in order to fulfill every domain of study. A student not interested in maths, planning to pursue journalism in college, have to study maths because his curriculum would include that. This can be hold parallel for a student thinking of becoming a engineer. He may have to study history even though is more interested in solving problem requiring maths. Such a curriculum would be quite rigorous for a student. In fact, student who maybe quite week in a particular subject, may have a very hard time passing the particular subject.
A same national curriculum will make students clearer in their choice for college studies. But such curriculum will be quite rigorous and exacting for a student.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, may, nonetheless, regarding, so, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 58.6224719101 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 2235.4752809 63% => OK
No of words: 276.0 442.535393258 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14130434783 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86728380617 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 215.323595506 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489130434783 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 704.065955056 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.287474675 60.3974514979 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.8333333333 118.986275619 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 23.4991977007 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.21951772744 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20349138025 0.243740707755 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798437298439 0.0831039109588 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652081765621 0.0758088955206 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148418006259 0.150359130593 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556967689443 0.0667264976115 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.8420337079 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.94 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 100.480337079 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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