a nation should require all its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college rather than allow school in different parts of the nation to determine which academic courses to offer.
Student life is the golden time period. Basically they should build their aim. During the early age, they have special talent, they can easily learn everything. If they cross their life from the early phase, they are artless in their future as well. Students can learn those things which is closed related to their daily life. I strongly disagree that statement says,"all parts of country should have same national curriculum during the school life." I feel this way because of the some reasons: easy to learn, useful to their life, and to develop country easily. I will explore these points in the following essay.
First of all, it is easy to learn those things which are daily used in their life. Now a days students take study as a complex work. Since curriculum is not appropriate for them. They want to learn the different knowledge with their own native language. But government does not care about the public view. For instance, Nepal, small and the landlocked country, contains 123 casts and more then 100 languages they followed. Which makes the difficulty to make the policy maker to make a common course. But if government gives the chance to study the subjects with their own language, really they can learn the everything easily.
In addition, if course of study related to their daily life, which is very useful for their future as well. For example, anyone who lived in the earthquake hazardous area, they should have knowledge of the preventive measure of that hazard. Himalaya region of the Nepal is more vulnerable for this hazard. So those who lived at that region should have good knowledge of earthquake. Similarly Himalaya region is cold and there is not suitable environment for crops and agricultural field. So they are suitable to take tourists education, which helps to guide the visitors at that area.
Moreover, they can do better at that field that is easy to learn, easy to follow, and useful their life. To do research in depth of ecosystem of the particular area, only that kind of person can do that job, who is usual for this area. If you want to do research about the Sahara desert you must have the capacity to stay the higher temperature. At that condition, nearby student only can do that job. It is needed to achieve the goal for particular area and particular subject, particular and interested person is needed.
In conclusion, to develop the field of study and country, it is needed to give a particular place course. Which makes revolution in the education field because students can learn fast and easily.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, really, similarly, so, then, well, for example, for instance, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 33.0505617978 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2127.0 2235.4752809 95% => OK
No of words: 438.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85616438356 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44738741868 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 215.323595506 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.465753424658 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 661.5 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.9172104651 60.3974514979 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.9642857143 118.986275619 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6428571429 23.4991977007 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.17857142857 5.21951772744 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.83258426966 248% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143445801078 0.243740707755 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0390443958472 0.0831039109588 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0315174992544 0.0758088955206 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0787620784568 0.150359130593 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435562859083 0.0667264976115 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 14.1392134831 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 48.8420337079 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 12.1743820225 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 100.480337079 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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