A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.

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A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.

Development of a nation is always dependent on young generation. Young and fresh minds tend to develop ideas different and novel from previous generations. So it is necessary to shape these budding minds with appropriate and quality education. While a cursory glance at the idea to give every student uniform curriculum for education might seem benevolent it overshadows the constraints that it might put on students if such approach to education is deployed.
First of all, the sole purpose of education is to give a foundation to a student on which he can build his future. With appropriate knowledge he can pursue his dreams and his passion. But a consolidated and inflexible curriculum will limit on the basis of what it can offer to a student. Different people have different ambitions which need disparate foundations of knowledge. For an example a person who seeks to be a biologist or a doctor might not need mathematics to an extent which an engineer needs. Hence forcing individuals to follow one absolute curriculum will discourage them and will limit their deep understanding of the topic that they desire to study.
Moreover, sometimes forcing students to come out of their interest and follow a more limited path might bring the moral down. Hence it might affect the output that they can offer. If we want to avoid such scenario then we have to include all foundational courses to all possible fields of study into our curriculum. Though it sounds ideal scenario, practically it is not possible. A student can not study everything in one curriculum and will tend to suffer in the areas which he has little interest.
Adding to the negative side, Similar curriculum around the nation will limit the ability to innovate. Innovation comes from divergent ideas, which is stymied if everyone has to study same curriculum. Similar curriculum will only give rise to similar minds. So for a nation which wishes to develop, such lack of ideas will be a roadblock. Researches suggest that people who feel a sense of independence in their academic activity tend to perform better. So a curriculum which only imposes constraints is definitely not helping the students.
Some theorists might point out that similar curriculum will enable us to create a more comparable measure among the students to find out precocious academic luminaries. But, can you judge a fish by its ability to fly? So such comparision will always be skewed.
Similar curriculum only confines the ability of students and precludes them to beget innovation. While little improvement might be expected, the vitiating factors overwhelm positive aspects. Hence It is not advisable to impose same national curriculum.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, moreover, so, then, while, as to, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 12.4196629213 193% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2251.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 441.0 442.535393258 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10430839002 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58257569496 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84882170196 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517006802721 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 728.1 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0649980683 60.3974514979 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.3703703704 118.986275619 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 23.4991977007 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.55555555556 5.21951772744 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212985868993 0.243740707755 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592917930735 0.0831039109588 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598756134433 0.0758088955206 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115784212247 0.150359130593 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412912228176 0.0667264976115 62% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 100.480337079 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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