A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
Following the common curriculum among students under college level throughout the nation is a better idea and the implementation of it matters a lot on their lives. According to me, same national curriculum is to be followed for a better nation. Initially, governament of our nation should take a deep responsibility for developing a proper curriculum. Because, as i mentioned that every child should follow the same system, there should be some proper standards to be followed for curriculum formation.
Few important rules to be mentioned in it are, discipline , sports, general studies classes, cultural and other activities. These are the few important things to be considered. Now-a-days, teaching of discipline to children is not shown as keen importance, but this impacts badly to great extent on their future and also to our society.
It is also required to involve sports sessions in their daily time-table so as to improve their physical resistance and get them exposed to outdoor environment and to know about their unknown interests. Educational institutions should also conduct cultural events atleats twice a year which allows the new talents to be exposed to society. And it is also important to take the students to industrial tours and science fairs which shows the practical view.
Apart from these, it is also required to add some special subjects like general studies, moral values and technical classes. By addition of these subjects , students throughout the nation will acquire not only knowledge but also wisdom. Technical classes from lower classes onwards will allow them to know about the advantages and disadvantages of using it and will restrict them from getting spoiled.
In addition to all of the above, inclusion of meditation and yoga classes helps the children to get survive from many of the diseases at early stages and leads to have a peaceful life.
In conclusion,following the same pattern of study until certain stage in whole nation will make children to have common knowledge on all aspects to some extent and that helps them to find their area of interest and also that knowledge assist them in making right decisions for their future. Atlast, inclusion of all the above mentioned ideas will let them lead a positive and a bright life which inturn makes our nation bright.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...e fairs which shows the practical view. Apart from these, it is also required to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, apart from, as to, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1947.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 378.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15079365079 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81036861375 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529100529101 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 607.5 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.608184665 60.3974514979 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.6875 118.986275619 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.625 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.21951772744 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187141334215 0.243740707755 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702026404255 0.0831039109588 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695153107553 0.0758088955206 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0832255858561 0.150359130593 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0752103208375 0.0667264976115 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 100.480337079 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.