A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum with some flexibility until they enter college. curriculum is decided considering the need of all the students throughout the nation.
Its needed for a nation to have a common national curriculum before students do enter colleges. it is obvious that the teachers should follow common curriculum so that there will be no discrimination. The curriculum should target in all over development of all the students with common study materials, so that no one feel that they they are left behind. The curriculum should be common throughout the nation up to some extent but it should be flexible too. because nationwide language and culture do varies, so there should be some variations accordingly and some main subjects are to be kept same, so as to bring all students to same level, then it'll be easier for all the students to apply to colleges of their choice throughout the nation. The curriculum should also be flexible for students, so that students have liberty to choose subjects and topics n which they are more interested. there should be equal proportion of practical knowledge along-with, because practicals develop more creativity and creativity brings new ideas. The designed curriculum should be variant according to students, like some might like something more over some other subject, so they should get more of chance to learn what they like but curriculum should also involve all the topics because sometimes students do like some topic but after some time they may develop interest in some other topic as well so some part should be taught common to all the students because to be an understanding person one need to have knowledge of other subjects as well other than his subject of specialization.
In conclusion, there should be a common curriculum throughout the nation before entering college, with some flexibility and variation according to regional culture and students personal interests.
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- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
- Young people should be encouraged to pursue long-term, realistic goals rather than seek immediate fame and recognition.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the po 50
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Suggestion: Curriculum
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...ulum before students do enter colleges. it is obvious that the teachers should fol...
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Suggestion: they
...udy materials, so that no one feel that they they are left behind. The curriculum should ...
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Suggestion: Because
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...some main subjects are to be kept same, so as to bring all students to same level, then...
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...n subjects are to be kept same, so as to bring all students to same level, then i...
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...opics n which they are more interested. there should be equal proportion of practical...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, may, so, then, well, as to, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 2235.4752809 75% => OK
No of words: 325.0 442.535393258 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14769230769 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77270892683 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 215.323595506 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.424615384615 0.4932671777 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 526.5 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 126.930774391 60.3974514979 210% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 152.090909091 118.986275619 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5454545455 23.4991977007 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90909090909 5.21951772744 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.446030533805 0.243740707755 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.252681554915 0.0831039109588 304% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.2103406374 0.0758088955206 277% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.451776302246 0.150359130593 300% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.24242662835 0.0667264976115 363% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 14.1392134831 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 48.8420337079 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 100.480337079 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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