A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
The author in the passage asserts that a nation should consider mandating all the students to study same national curriculum till they enter college. This assertion is too specific and cannot be generalized to all nation. Many nations in the world vary with size, population, ethnicity, its history, religion, etc. I believe author should consider these aspects before generalizing.
Consider the example of vast nations like United States or China or India. Internally these nations are diverse with respect to ethnicity, culture and religion. Each group has its own past and history associated with it. Having a common curriculum, may lead to making the students learn less about their history or may make them difficult to socialize among the same cultural people. To add one more reason, each population internally can have different level of intelligence and having common curriculum may become onerous to some students or vice-versa.
Another reason to state, not all students go to collage. Some of them drop off before the college to pursue agriculture or become entrepreneurs or businessman or etc. Common curriculum may not help students to grow enough to go out without knowing how the culture and people socialize in that area.
To take an example, consider United States, the nation is made up of sub states and each states has its own history on how it has formed and grown. California state have grown differently when compared to Texas or Oregon. California state and Oregon state weather conditions are very different. Students who drop out before college to take up agriculture will not have sufficient knowledge on respective state wise weather conditions. Weather conditions of California state is irrelevant to a person who does agriculture in Oregon state.
Albeit, some may argue that having a common curriculum would provide equal opportunities to all and would create a common platform for learning and may result is similar growth of students across the nation. Admittedly, this may make sense to smaller nations like Japan or Italy where population is not diverse but not for large nation.
To sum up, to author contention can be applied to specific nation depending on size. population, ethnicity, etc, however, it cannot be generalized for all nations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 86, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Population
...d to specific nation depending on size. population, ethnicity, etc, however, it cannot be ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'as for', 'to sum up', 'with respect to']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.271393643032 0.240241500013 113% => OK
Verbs: 0.166259168704 0.157235817809 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0709046454768 0.0880659088768 81% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0366748166259 0.0497285424764 74% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0268948655257 0.0444667217837 60% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0757946210269 0.12292977631 62% => OK
Participles: 0.0440097799511 0.0406280797675 108% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.7376513756 2.79330140395 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0513447432763 0.030933414821 166% => OK
Particles: 0.0122249388753 0.0016655270985 734% => OK
Determiners: 0.080684596577 0.0997080785238 81% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.039119804401 0.0249443105267 157% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0146699266504 0.0148568991511 99% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2296.0 2732.02544248 84% => OK
No of words: 368.0 452.878318584 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.23913043478 6.0361032391 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.58838876751 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.423913043478 0.366273622748 116% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.301630434783 0.280924506359 107% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.198369565217 0.200843997647 99% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.133152173913 0.132149295362 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7376513756 2.79330140395 98% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 219.290929204 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521739130435 0.48968727796 107% => OK
Word variations: 56.554802057 55.4138127331 102% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6194690265 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.5238095238 23.380412469 75% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3136885509 59.4972553346 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.333333333 141.124799967 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5238095238 23.380412469 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.380952380952 0.674092028746 57% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.94800884956 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.21349557522 19% => OK
Readability: 47.6868530021 51.4728631049 93% => OK
Elegance: 1.70212765957 1.64882698954 103% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373120723502 0.391690518653 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.105623821665 0.123202303941 86% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0855017221863 0.077325440228 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.518957650671 0.547984918172 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.130995958088 0.149214159877 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127627271828 0.161403998019 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.09547176334 0.0892212321368 107% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.240627073396 0.385218514788 62% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0985774503086 0.0692045440612 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228069709268 0.275328986314 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0967266451796 0.0653680567796 148% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.4325221239 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88274336283 225% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 7.0 7.22455752212 97% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 9.0 2.70907079646 332% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.5995575221 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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