A nation should require all its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Juvenile education has been an issue that has been alluring us ever since its inclusion. We have constanly been upgrading its process to meet the requirements of its time. And since its inclusion there has always persisted various methods from which students got there education, including but not limited to home-schooling, public schools, private schools, so I am not confident that carping this options and enforcing just a singular education system would be beneficial for students.
It cannot be ignored that if students follow a fixed national curriculum then everyone would get judged of equal grounds, which is something that you would want to do. We want every students to have equal opportunities; in that way the result would not be biased towards those whose family has a better financial stability. At least that is what one is inclined to believe. But in reality each student will always face their own unique personal conundrum and uniform curriculum would not be able to provide equal grounds.
Then there is the obvious quandary, just because every students are facing the same curriculum does not neccessarily mean that education system is a good one. As a matter of fact if there were no other curriculums available than we might not even know the possibilities of a better system. We would have to face the issue of a stagnant curriculum that never gets updated.
And of course there will always be students for whom the national curriculum is not a natural fit, and they will end up suffering greatly due to the lack of other options, if we follow a singular national curriculum.
Overall having an uniform national curriculum is a covetous prospect, one that will seemingly provide students' with uniform grounds. However it styms educational growth, and may be detrimental for some students, and thus having the same national curriculum is not a viable solution.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 17, column 16, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...tional curriculum. Overall having an uniform national curriculum is a coveto...
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Line 17, column 134, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... provide students with uniform grounds. However it styms educational growth, and may be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, then, thus, at least, of course, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 58.6224719101 39% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 2235.4752809 71% => OK
No of words: 312.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10576923077 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74955729806 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551282051282 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.2078152647 60.3974514979 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.538461538 118.986275619 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 5.21951772744 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232458484701 0.243740707755 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0836817948446 0.0831039109588 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599125034719 0.0758088955206 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139866098277 0.150359130593 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541520640505 0.0667264976115 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 100.480337079 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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