A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
In the last decade, more and more debate arise concerning whether allow students to choose their curriculum in terms of their interest. However, students study the same national curriculum is necessary before they enter college and a nation should require all of its students to follow it.
The national curriculum helps students to obtain fundamental knowledge such as language, math, and everyday facts that students need to know. For instance, students in the US should all learn basic English for a communication purpose. Through attending English class in their early childhood, they learned how to speak, read, and using grammar correctly.
Moreover, the national curriculum provides various subjects that allow students to explore their interest. As mentioned previously, the national curriculum contains different subjects as language, math, science. Students may able to explore their interests through attending these classes, which help them to choose their direction and what major they want to focus on in college.
Nevertheless, studying the same national curriculum may not necessarily apply to all students, especially students with a learning disability. It is recommended that parents and teachers should pay attention to their children whether they appear difficulties in learning.
It concludes that a nation should require all of its students to attend the same national curriculum before entering college. It helps students to obtain the basic knowledge they need for everyday living. It also allows students to explore their interest in their future direction. Parents and teachers should provide assistance in helping their children if they have encountered difficulties in learning.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 17, column 127, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nal curriculum before entering college. It helps students to obtain the basic know...
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Line 17, column 206, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nowledge they need for everyday living. It also allows students to explore their i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 19.5258426966 10% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 58.6224719101 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 2235.4752809 66% => OK
No of words: 256.0 442.535393258 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.75 5.05705443957 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78089885424 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 215.323595506 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5078125 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 704.065955056 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.1463697874 60.3974514979 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.142857143 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2857142857 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21428571429 5.21951772744 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313048409569 0.243740707755 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129395454411 0.0831039109588 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113289409135 0.0758088955206 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204677785722 0.150359130593 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506623789314 0.0667264976115 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.07 12.1639044944 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 100.480337079 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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