A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
In my opinion, "one nation, one rule" is always a better option for students. Here are some examples supporting it.
same curriculum will result in equal knowledge which is the right way to deal with. if right knowledge then right opportunity. if right opportunity then right decision.
While seeking for a job the factor of place does not matter. So the same should be maintained in all systems.
The intellectual skill of a student cannot be measured by the place in which he is living. There is no scientific proof explaining it.
Hence I conclude by saying it is ethical to use same across the nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, then, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 14.8657303371 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 33.0505617978 18% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 58.6224719101 20% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 12.9106741573 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 530.0 2235.4752809 24% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 106.0 442.535393258 24% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.2086804361 4.55969084622 70% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74474805136 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 75.0 215.323595506 35% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.707547169811 0.4932671777 143% => OK
syllable_count: 160.2 704.065955056 23% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 10.0 23.0359550562 43% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.8131269617 60.3974514979 33% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 53.0 118.986275619 45% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.6 23.4991977007 45% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.1 5.21951772744 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167801904414 0.243740707755 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604489192156 0.0831039109588 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363569061072 0.0758088955206 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0845430551449 0.150359130593 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234043602567 0.0667264976115 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 14.1392134831 52% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.79 48.8420337079 143% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 12.1743820225 49% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.54 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 100.480337079 29% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 11.8971910112 38% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 11.2143820225 54% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 6.0 11.7820224719 51% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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