A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
I completely agree with the statement made by the author. the education system should be constant across all the schools. This will ensure that all the students after coming to the college will have same level of education background, but to implement such a system various arrangements must be made. Let us discuss the issue in more detail.
In India the education curriculum vary from state to state and thus from school to school. Many government schools follow state level curriculum while private school follow central board and international curriculum. Because of this the students going to different school have different syllabus. The level of english taught in the schools following international and central board curriculum is high compared to the same taught in state board schools. Thus the students of private schools are more proficient in english than state board students.
Thus if same national curriculum is followed throughout, the students will be equally qualified in all the subjects until they enter college. Thus professors will not have to put an extra effort to a group of student which are comparatively weaker in a particular subject. But to implement such a system government has to make various arrangements.
To implement same national curriculum all the teachers are needed to be introduced to the new curriculum and trained accordingly. Government also has to ensure that all the schools have the facilities required to adjust to the new curriculum.
Education sector is the integral part of any developed country. Thus government should take extra efforts to improve this sector and ensure that all the students get same education and thus equal opportunities to showcase their talent.
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Discourse Markers used:
['accordingly', 'also', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'thus', 'while', 'as to']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.262798634812 0.240241500013 109% => OK
Verbs: 0.160409556314 0.157235817809 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.122866894198 0.0880659088768 140% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0341296928328 0.0497285424764 69% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0136518771331 0.0444667217837 31% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0955631399317 0.12292977631 78% => OK
Participles: 0.0409556313993 0.0406280797675 101% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.82404317154 2.79330140395 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.061433447099 0.030933414821 199% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.105802047782 0.0997080785238 106% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0238907849829 0.0249443105267 96% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00341296928328 0.0148568991511 23% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1810.0 2732.02544248 66% => OK
No of words: 275.0 452.878318584 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.58181818182 6.0361032391 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.58838876751 89% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.4 0.366273622748 109% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.316363636364 0.280924506359 113% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.229090909091 0.200843997647 114% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.156363636364 0.132149295362 118% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82404317154 2.79330140395 101% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 219.290929204 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476363636364 0.48968727796 97% => OK
Word variations: 45.2924712752 55.4138127331 82% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6194690265 78% => OK
Sentence length: 17.1875 23.380412469 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4194801426 59.4972553346 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.125 141.124799967 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1875 23.380412469 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.674092028746 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.21349557522 230% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 48.8238636364 51.4728631049 95% => OK
Elegance: 1.91803278689 1.64882698954 116% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387119684137 0.391690518653 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.147214163166 0.123202303941 119% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.108550911819 0.077325440228 140% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.598142943855 0.547984918172 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.155903700953 0.149214159877 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155218206007 0.161403998019 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0901669549989 0.0892212321368 101% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.317138604337 0.385218514788 82% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0515401505131 0.0692045440612 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252990892399 0.275328986314 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531175535123 0.0653680567796 81% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.4325221239 38% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.30420353982 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88274336283 225% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 3.0 7.22455752212 42% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 9.0 2.70907079646 332% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.5995575221 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.