A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.

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A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.

Here a recommendation has been made that the nation should make provisions where all of its students study under the same national curriculum until they enter the college.

Education is one of the fundamental right of human being and seeing the kind of rat race extant in the society, no wonder the government is under the pressure to provide the best education to its citizen in order to make them ready to face the global competition. The above recommendation would work wonders in the countries which has large and diverse population like India. The education system in India is mostly state-based. That is every state has different curriculum and different method of assessing the student's academic performance. This set up was made in order to teach the kids more about the states in which they are born, but this setup has a major flaw which becomes more relevant when the same kid is competing against the kids from the other states for the various competitive exams at college levels. In order to eleimiate this bias, 'one education for all' seems to be the panacea for the current woes, where all the students are taught and assessed on the similar parameters.

One more benefit of making the education system homogenous, apart from the benefits mentioned in the above paragrah would be bridging the gap between the social and economic classes, bringing the private schools and public schools on the same page on the social textbook. If this recommendation is practiced with great care, its future consequences will truely benefit the society, and country in whole.

Though this recommendation seems to only show the glorified aspects and solution for each economic and social problems that are rampart in the society but I guess the biggest critics of this recommendations will be the child pyschologists and teachers of special case students. As you cannot compare oranges with apples similarly you cannot compare brain of one child with another. And subjecting them to the same regularized curriculum while surely have its downfall. Kids with delayed learning ability will not be able to cope with the normal IQ possessing kids, or a precocious child will feel frustrated with the curriculum and we might lose out on identifying the prodigies from the sea of students.

One of country that defied all the norms of generalized curriculum and did well in the literacy rate is Ireland. Ireland is one of the few countries where students are not taught the textbook curriculum rather they are taught of the things that are more relevant in daily life like cooking, repairing electronic, socialising. Kids there do not have homework and do not have class test till certain grade and yet they have proved more efffiicient and possess greater IQ than compared to the other country kids.

Each nation is different from the rest of the other nations owing to the demography it has, whether the nation should be adopting this recommendation or not depends on the various factors like nature and size of the demography, current socio-economic status etc.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...aphy, current socio-economic status etc.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, similarly, so, well, while, apart from, i guess, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 58.6224719101 119% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2576.0 2235.4752809 115% => OK
No of words: 509.0 442.535393258 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06090373281 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74984508646 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70956643459 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 215.323595506 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504911591356 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 807.3 704.065955056 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.593430954 60.3974514979 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.529411765 118.986275619 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.9411764706 23.4991977007 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.82352941176 5.21951772744 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252605670527 0.243740707755 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853549252205 0.0831039109588 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.150817752012 0.0758088955206 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181298065575 0.150359130593 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.217002782517 0.0667264976115 325% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 14.1392134831 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 48.8420337079 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.66 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 100.480337079 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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