A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
I strongly agree with the statement. studying same national curriculum suggests same environment and same opportunity given to each student to grow and nourish. As a result all the students entering college will be on the same page. The professor will be aware about the basic knowledge of the students. On a positive note, if a curriculum is followed by more number of students it keeps getting improved day by day. With same curriculum followed, a student is free to study in any part of the country. it is very helpful for students whose parents keep travelling for work. There are few disadvantages too for this recommendation, for example following a common national curriculum can take away the chance of exploring regional tradition, history et cetera. But anyway these things can be introduced as extra hobby learning’s too, or they can be introduced as part of national curriculum, making it rich with all cultures, regional knowledge. Overall following a same national curriculum is beneficial for students in many ways.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, if, so, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.3162921348 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 33.0505617978 21% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 58.6224719101 31% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 867.0 2235.4752809 39% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 169.0 442.535393258 38% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13017751479 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 4.55969084622 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0158713252 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 215.323595506 50% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633136094675 0.4932671777 128% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 704.065955056 40% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.655429911 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9 23.4991977007 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.21951772744 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.97078651685 20% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269672469275 0.243740707755 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111445608885 0.0831039109588 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554961772257 0.0758088955206 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.269672469275 0.150359130593 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667264976115 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 100.480337079 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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