For the foundation education we need to implement same national curriculum for a student until they enter college. Students are the future of a nation . If the foundation education is not given properly then we can not expect positive output in the future.Thats why all students must maintain same standard of curriculum until the enter college.
There are various causes behind this standing. As a child the student does not about all the fields . So day by day he or she come up with his own interest point. This is possible by giving same national curriculum . This will make his basement and by relying this basement he will choose to follow his own interest.
The same national curriculum is also necessary to choose future steps a student should take. For example : A student may find out that he or she doesnot like math or science subjects then in the college there will be scope to choose his own subjects what he feels interesting . This is what is important for a student to know himself. If there would be different curriculum then the students would be crumbled from the start.
The difference of the curriculum may be good for some students who are quite brilliant from the start but not for those who are still searching which will be better for him to choose. As to write a sentence we need to know words , same goes for same curriculum. For better understanding we need to learn basics.
Many people feels that why we were taught every subject in our childhood. But the point is not about all subjects or all curriculum ,the main point is to know about your depth of knowledge. So a nation should require all of its students to go through same national curriculum to know what they are really good at until they enter college.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, really, so, still, then, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 2235.4752809 65% => OK
No of words: 308.0 442.535393258 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68831168831 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5060193671 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 215.323595506 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.480519480519 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 704.065955056 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.2970649967 60.3974514979 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.2222222222 118.986275619 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1111111111 23.4991977007 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.21951772744 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303651748801 0.243740707755 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107062108064 0.0831039109588 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0994825816708 0.0758088955206 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1776050649 0.150359130593 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0850261584358 0.0667264976115 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 14.1392134831 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 48.8420337079 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 12.1743820225 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.1639044944 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.43 8.38706741573 77% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 100.480337079 38% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.7820224719 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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