Whether a nation should require all of its stadent to take the same course before they enter colleges? With qualification, I fundamentally agree with the speaker.
The statement required two qualification in two aspects. First of all, there are some talented students who have strong interest in some certain of study. In this case, the nation should provide more resource to help them developing more in what they want, rather than forcing them into study redundant things that they don't need. Secondly, several subjects are too boring for some students, but they still have to struggle with them.Maybe they have to stay up every day to deal with every tests. In this case, they may finally lost interest in everything and fail to persue they own dream.
Aside from the above qualification, I agree that all student should study same curriculum until they enter college. First, it is needed for most of the people to develop a foundamental knowledge before they study professional knowledge. The inventer of the FINFET, who has influenced the world significantly, said that his success is come from the fundational training of math, science, and critical thinking in Taiwan. Without these training, he might not come up with such ingenious thought. So I believe that under most circumstances, the unified course in a country may help students to develop the fundamental skill which they may find it useful in the future.
Secondly, the same course may let us able to share the same memory, letting us become more familiar with each other. Even in the college, we sometimes talk about the text in the senior high school's textbook. Although in most circumstance we take it as a joke, but it still enables us to get familiar with others especially when we are freshman. Because most of the students in the college are come from different places in the country. If we don't have the same background, we may fail to set up connection with other easily.
In sum, without the sweeping generalization that "all" of student should take the same course requardless of what they want. Under most circumstances, I fundamentally agree that the same national courses are needed because it help us to devolop fundational knowledge and share the same memory with others.
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- Over the past year our late night news program has devoted increasingly more time to covering national news and less time to covering weather and local news During the same time period most of the complaints we received from viewers were concerned with th 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: to develop; develop
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...foundamental knowledge before they study professional knowledge. The inventer of...
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...it as a joke, but it still enables us to get familiar with others especially when...
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...others especially when we are freshman. Because most of the students in the college are...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.5258426966 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 33.0505617978 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1899.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 378.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02380952381 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77215480261 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52380952381 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.7310208354 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9473684211 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8947368421 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73684210526 5.21951772744 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334077045259 0.243740707755 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100022433347 0.0831039109588 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134344388249 0.0758088955206 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203205905347 0.150359130593 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102394129305 0.0667264976115 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 100.480337079 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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