Every action has some reaction and possibly, a reaction is not merely a consequence of the action. There are many ways to accomplish a task and the outcome will depend on how we carry out the task will matter most.
In 2016, the government of India passed the demonetization bill. In which, currency notes of 500 and 1000 rupees were banned. Demonetization was a shock to the Indian economy and also to the Indian citizens. The purpose of this ban was to make black money disappear but instead, the common man of India and their household suffered heavily. citizens had to go through the painful journey because government's lack of care and deliberation while making such impetuous actions. This action resembles the operation done on a patient without giving him anesthesia. If This decision was taken by taking various outcomes into accounts such as the suffering of people or the viability of the policy then the outcome would be different.
Think of a doctor treating a patient in a hurry where the doctor overlooks some of the symptoms that which patient is having, a patient might get more sick after the treatment. For example, if the patient is having dengue and the doctor is treating him without checking his white cell count, the patient will not feel better even after the course of medicine or worst he might die if his white cells drop below certain limits. If a doctor takes a different approach to treat the patient then the outcome will differ.
A myriad of examples suggests that the outcome of an action is not merely a consequence of action but rather it is depending on the approach we take to act. Thus how we act is what matters the most.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 342, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Citizens
...a and their household suffered heavily. citizens had to go through the painful journey b...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 76, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...t in a hurry where the doctor overlooks some of the symptoms that which patient is having, ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 428, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... white cells drop below certain limits. If a doctor takes a different approach to ...
^^
Line 7, column 113, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...y a consequence of action but rather it is depending on the approach we take to act. Thus ho...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 158, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...pending on the approach we take to act. Thus how we act is what matters the most.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, then, thus, while, as to, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 2235.4752809 62% => OK
No of words: 292.0 442.535393258 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72945205479 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53427202875 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571917808219 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 704.065955056 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9652666073 60.3974514979 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6428571429 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07142857143 5.21951772744 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189811391154 0.243740707755 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671650274688 0.0831039109588 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0943179100515 0.0758088955206 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159918974785 0.150359130593 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.142056712898 0.0667264976115 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 14.1392134831 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 100.480337079 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 342, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Citizens
...a and their household suffered heavily. citizens had to go through the painful journey b...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 76, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...t in a hurry where the doctor overlooks some of the symptoms that which patient is having, ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 428, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... white cells drop below certain limits. If a doctor takes a different approach to ...
^^
Line 7, column 113, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...y a consequence of action but rather it is depending on the approach we take to act. Thus ho...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 158, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...pending on the approach we take to act. Thus how we act is what matters the most.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, then, thus, while, as to, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 2235.4752809 62% => OK
No of words: 292.0 442.535393258 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72945205479 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53427202875 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571917808219 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 704.065955056 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9652666073 60.3974514979 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6428571429 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07142857143 5.21951772744 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189811391154 0.243740707755 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671650274688 0.0831039109588 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0943179100515 0.0758088955206 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159918974785 0.150359130593 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.142056712898 0.0667264976115 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 14.1392134831 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 100.480337079 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.