"One can best understand the most important characteristics of a society by studying its major cities."
Most of the people are of the opinion that in order to comprehend the crucial traits of a community, it is essential for an individual to survey the trends in its important metropolis. On the other hand, some believe that the in-depth knowledge of culture can be obtained only by scrutinizing the pastoral areas. I agree with the author’s opinion to a great extent. My inclination towards the same is enhanced in the ensuing paragraphs.
To begin with, the foremost reason why author’s viewpoint convinces me is that all the technological advancements that happen in a country first are implemented in the major cities and from there they reach the rural areas. For instance, the metro trains are operational only in the major cities of India such as Delhi, Mumbai, and Kolkata to name a few. Moreover, there are better job opportunities for the people in the cities as compared to the country side. Most of the IT companies, chemical industries, etc. are developed in the urban areas only and hence industrial culture of a society can be understood efficiently by studying them. An apt example of this is the city of Bangalore in India which is known as the technical hub of the country because of the large number of software companies developed in the city.
The secondary reason why I agree with the author on his stand is that the trade and commerce of a nation flourishes best in a megacity. The entrepreneurs of any big company decide their plan of action keeping in mind the preferences of the people and the latest fashion trends in the city. Most of the foreign exchange of goods between two nations also happens through their important cities only. Another reason is that the schools and universities are also developed only in the prominent cities of a country. So, the students who aspire to have a bright future often migrate to cities in order to get a quality education. Hence the literacy rate of a country could be evaluated efficiently by studying the success rate of these educational institutes.
On the other hand, in order to gain knowledge about the cultural heritage of a country it is essential for an individual to visit the country side. All the varied aspects of a civilization such as literature, traditions, rituals, and language have their roots established in the rural areas of the nation. A perfect illustration of this is the festival of Navratri celebrated in Gujarat with the folk dance form of Garba which originated in the villages of Gujarat. In order to obtain a better understanding of all these things, it is essential to interact with the native people living in this areas. Furthermore, in the developing countries like India where majority of population resides in the villages, a significant proportion of revenue of the country is generated from various agricultural and small-scale industries such as dairy, poultry, etc. and hence complete information about growth and development of the nation cannot be obtained by excluding them.
Thus, to draw a conclusion, I would like to say that most of the data regarding the way of living of a particular group of people of a nation can be obtained by evaluating its prime cities. Nevertheless, one should also study the small towns and villages in order to know about the history of the society.
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Suggestion: Hence,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, second, so, thus, for instance, such as, to begin with, on the other hand, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 103.0 58.6224719101 176% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2755.0 2235.4752809 123% => OK
No of words: 560.0 442.535393258 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91964285714 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.8645985582 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89084531014 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 264.0 215.323595506 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.471428571429 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 895.5 704.065955056 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5911405205 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.791666667 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 5.21951772744 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152908599036 0.243740707755 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0371319337014 0.0831039109588 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406874859933 0.0758088955206 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0885826666571 0.150359130593 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422160691162 0.0667264976115 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 14.1392134831 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 138.0 100.480337079 137% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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