In order to become well-rounded individuals, all college students should be required to take courses in which they read poetry, novels, mythology, and other types of imaginative literature.
The argument that to become well rounded individual you need to opted for the subjects such as poetry,novel,etc is a bit controversial one. It would be helpful to examine the specific cases to make this tendentious arguent a bit concrete. On the one hand novels, Mythology won’t always make the people well-rounded because some are the basic value which you cultivated from the childhood. On the other hand though it helps people thinking and motivating them in there bad phase of life. I believed that every student should not acquire such type of subject during there colledge days.
During higher secondary days in the group of class every one has the different interst which helps them to take subject accordingly in the college but due to parential force or any the student should not waste such opportunity as a result opting for the subject of the personal choice is been provided by the unversity. It also has a major reason that student try to opt for the subject in which they really have the interest because wasting time and efforts in the other subject would not lead to better place for the student in the fututre for example if legends like messi would have started learning subject like poetry he wouldnot be in the position where he is today.
Morever if the person never understand the such novels and still try to opt subject and would not be able to complete the circuilum would make the student to repeat the whole year as a result the person would be more depressed because of the repetation and it would have its major effect in the future at the time of job seeking and various other reason even for the further studies because it make the bad impression on the person mind on the opposite side.
However some might argue that creative minds help people getting jobs in the market sinces there is lot of competion in the market currently though I believe that with the help of poetry, novels,various creative imagination subject & mythology the person woould have some sort of creative mind but always in each field there is no requirement for the creative mind for example in the field of doctor there is no need to have a creative mind because it may inturn affect the help of the person .
To sum it up there are arguments to be made from both the side, sinces there are greater advantages on the side of not taking it up i believe the person should not forces himself from taking such type of subject. Student are not required to be a all rounded they are expected to be the master of atleast one subject of there interest sinces there is famous saying”Master of all, but the jack of none.”
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, however, if, may, really, second, so, still, well, for example, sort of, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2184.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 466.0 442.535393258 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68669527897 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64618479453 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50567694988 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.459227467811 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 693.0 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 23.0359550562 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 139.064941129 60.3974514979 230% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 198.545454545 118.986275619 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 42.3636363636 23.4991977007 180% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3636363636 5.21951772744 237% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203201901057 0.243740707755 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869916750342 0.0831039109588 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448994568867 0.0758088955206 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116399036374 0.150359130593 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636217997573 0.0667264976115 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.8 14.1392134831 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.31 48.8420337079 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 12.1743820225 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.81 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 100.480337079 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 11.2143820225 168% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.7820224719 161% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.