"In order to improve the quality of instruction at the college and university level, all faculty should be required to spend time working outside the academic world in professions relevant to the courses they teach."
The statement claims that all the faculty members of any college or university should spend time in professions related to their courses other than spending time in academic world as a requirement. The claim cannot be totally agreed but could be considered partially.
colleges and universities are the places where young generation attain to gain academic qualification which is required for their upcoming profession">professional life. Therefore, the academic structure here must be shaped in a way that would fulfill the desired knowledge and experiences for entering the profession as a beginner for the youth. The faculty members play a vital role in preparing the youth for this purpose by delivering their knowledge and experiences in the form of academic structure. If they spend all the time in related profession">professional field, they might lack the theoretical knowledge.
On the other hand, spending time on profession">professional field will enhance their practical knowledge which would be helpful for them in teaching. but the students must attain this profession">professional courses which would be more fruitful for their future career as students are the one who would be mostly benefited by this.
For example, academic curriculum of colleges and universities must include internships and industrial visits related to the courses for the students as a requirement while fulfilling conditions as graduates. These would help the students in the long run as they will have not only academic knowledge but also practical experience.
In conclusion, The statement is partially acceptable as profession">professional experience is necessary for shaping a student for his future career. but only the knowledge taught by the faculty is not enough. students must gain that knowledge by themselves in order to become a better candidate in the competitive profession">professional world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 58.6224719101 41% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1691.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 287.0 442.535393258 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.89198606272 5.05705443957 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.69794185259 2.79657885939 168% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 215.323595506 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512195121951 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 704.065955056 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9747103223 60.3974514979 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.076923077 118.986275619 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 5.21951772744 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254151457363 0.243740707755 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10691499973 0.0831039109588 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0842311917248 0.0758088955206 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167905879398 0.150359130593 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0914901393316 0.0667264976115 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 14.1392134831 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 48.8420337079 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.88 12.1639044944 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 100.480337079 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.